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28-01-2005 23:08 |
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Steppa
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thanks for the listen i'll check your track
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james
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31-01-2005 01:26 |
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Steppa
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31-01-2005 02:10 |
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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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ok cool intro...creepy for sure...ok so drums drop, and bass is fat i like it...but it goes absolutely no where...i can see that youre getting an average rating of 9/10? on that site...emmm...the track was cool bro but it goes no where...its boring after the first minute and a half...get more hits in there or somethign i dont know...but i wasnt geeling it totally...sorry...and i like ehavy evil dnb...and it jsut wanst my thing...sorry...
3/5 sounds
2/5 track
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31-01-2005 04:34 |
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peet
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Registration Date: 31-01-2004
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yeh internetdj is odd i always got 9/10 there with really awful tracks when i was on there like a year ago
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31-01-2005 07:30 |
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additive
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Registration Date: 09-02-2005
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at 26 seconds where u have that sample retrigging and time stretched, that could be much louder! it's dope.
nice breaks.. very loud, and it drowns out that mad sample behind it.
the kits work well together i like them
ok u have a mad break ur using, here's what you need to do.
open the break in a hit-point editor, and use groove of it to set ur midi events for the samples of the break. it keeps the drummers original groove and doesn't sound so robotic, its missing that vital groove element.
i really the screaming samples and you've put them together nicely.
the junglesque pitch shifts in the drums work nicely, but seriously considering layering another metallic snare over the existing snare if you're going to pitch shift, and be sure to pitch shift the whole of that kit, not just the snare.
some rhythmi variation would be great at about 4 mins because it does tend to get a bit repetitive, but it's definately got potential. i really dig the ideas in this one
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10-02-2005 23:08 |
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additive
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and just noticed,
remove the DC offset in ur layers,
and fix the envelope on ur sampler (give the release 10-20ms) so that you don't get that annoying clicking...
if you're not using a sampler, then find your zero-crossing (the beginning and end of a sample where it crosses the line in ur waveform editor) and either resample them so that the samples dont drop off at the end and make a click.
the effects are noticable on those clicks and it sounds rough.
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10-02-2005 23:12 |
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CHALLENJA
Steppa
Registration Date: 25-07-2004
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WOW 
thats alot of information for me to digest at this moment, but i will get back to all this information and study it carefully. thank you verymuch for the critique and the sound engineering advice. i'll take all your adivce to heart
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James
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11-02-2005 05:10 |
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tracassasin
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 08-02-2005
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