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Dj-Lowprofile 
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Registration Date: 25-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Funk (Un-finnished)' and post your comments here!!!
One of my new songs, not done yet. Im kinda stuck on what to do to it...I haven't worked much on the structure of this one yet.
Criticism appreciated!
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27-01-2005 21:18 |
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Stutterstep
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I like the song, It sounds very clean, Great use of samples. maybe try doing some transposing in the bass line. The congas sound great bring them back in the song with the amen. Really like the track Respect
Stutterstep
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27-01-2005 23:22 |
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Moody F
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Strong track with a nice
speedup-mad-‘Dirty 
Harry’- traffic-tire-smokin-chase sound!
Like it a lot! Impressive how da beatz are smashed in after the intro! 
It’s very short allright, but u said u’re not done yet workin’ on it. So:
from my point of view, as a listener in general, think it’s better when:
-stretched up in lenght and flavoured with filtering on (drum)parts,
-overall headroom/exciting of sound,
-some swirll to the subs to fit in better in whole.
The ‘gunshot’drop on 02:30 is REALLY awesome! Why don’t use this
smasher (repetetive) in a longer dropdown before the final part!
Hope u appreciate comments, suggests on this from a listener non-producer! 
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28-01-2005 18:38 |
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thefunke1
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This tune is neat, for sure a through back to some old style jungle, really like th congos/snare. nice base line at around 1:45 or so, really like the break at 2:30. Overall it has a nice flow, and some nice atmosphere, I look forward to hearing the finished product, for sure keep working on it as it gets the toes tapping, butt shaking and head bopping!!
As for advice hmm... not much, I like the way you put it together, and I the samples and drum sounds selected work well with the style of the tune. I'll let you be your own critic, and see what improvments you make on a future upload.
Thanks for the listen!!
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29-01-2005 17:24 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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Thanks for the comments - I'd like to hear some more criticism though. I'm kinda stumped on what to do with this track
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30-01-2005 07:14 |
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Moody F
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Think this track really deserves a good one but:
Is it that there are some specific items/parts/issues
about the track that needs criticism the most?
Or do u just like a random approach?
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30-01-2005 18:46 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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I need some help on the structure of the track..im stumped...lol
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30-01-2005 21:18 |
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Moody F
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Okay, understood.., 
Me, for now, gonna leave it here
by previous suggestions i posted.
Hope u get the help u need ...!
Come on u members out there!
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30-01-2005 22:33 |
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Surya
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Quite nice drums, but very empty sounding in the intro
The beating bassline should be more beating. Give it a massive punch!
Drop: quite nice. Drums are good, basslines too. Sound sucks though. The basslines need a boost and way more mid. Switches are cool.
Good start for a track, now continue with a breakdown followed by a new drop
2.25/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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01-02-2005 16:09 |
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