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Dj-Lowprofile 
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Registration Date: 25-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Dark Planet' and post your comments here!!!
This is one of my older tunes. I havent gotten around to finnishing it yet. Criticism appreciated.
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27-01-2005 00:05 |
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Nosrac
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Some earcatching sounds in the intro - nice pitch shifts - unexpected. The reverbed sound just before drop gives it major atmos. Nice tieing the intro sounds in with the bass at the drop - very unique bass sound. The nice deep version of this at 2:35 fills the speaker nicely. Perhaps should use a weaker amen in the intro. Need some snips, cuts and variation on this amen to spice this track up. With that done properly, this track could be stellar.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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27-01-2005 01:05 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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Thanks for the input. Yeah, I havn't put much time into the amen yet - I usually chop the shit out of my amens. I think thats the next thing im gonna do to this track.
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27-01-2005 01:54 |
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Sonix
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The synths really give the impression of a dark planet, nice dreamy wide open space. I can't comment on the bass as these speakers are a bit cack.
The drum loop could do with some more variation. Maybe take your loop and Recycle it up, for a couple of 4 or 8 bar end variations.
Deffo got potential, I think you should go back to it.
S.
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Need to lose another 5 microseconds.
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27-01-2005 04:23 |
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broadside
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Really like the stuff around the 1:15 mark, and then when that echo roar comes in at 1:42, really imaginative and evocative.
Try varying the drums a bit though maybe. I'm probably easily impressed but again I can imagine brocking out in a club to this no problems!
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27-01-2005 18:00 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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Anyone have any suggestions as to what I should do with the second drop? I just kinda threw the second half of the track together and I'm kinda stumped now.
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27-01-2005 19:06 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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nm...I fixed it up a little. I'm gonna post the new version soon.
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30-01-2005 07:11 |
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CHALLENJA
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Registration Date: 25-07-2004
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the tracks pretty good, i'd add maybe a vocal sample. "on this dark planet, evil has a domain"
your sub bass is real low on this mix.
i can hear it but not feel it
turned up the speakers properly and still could not feel it, run your bass at 60-80 hz on your graphic eq to get that thud thooooom feel to it, real low bass punch
ez
challenja
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may the lord bless and keep you!
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31-01-2005 01:33 |
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Darkside
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wow! reminds me so much of my own music. i'm surprised. VERY nice swirrly synth you have there, nice hard amen (altho very in need of breaks; chop that sucka up a little more often to keep interest) nice pad, one of the ones that comes with fruityloops i think. you need to bring the bass out a little bit for me to feel it tho.
overall: 4/5
beat: 3/5
melody: 4.5/5
fx: 4/5
thanks for sharing this nice song, peace
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01-02-2005 03:31 |
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Surya
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Nice tramen, but it sounds like it's the same loop the whole time. Give it some variation.
Nice bassline, but it could use a boost.
Gets a bit repetetive after a while though.
Ah, you drop the annoying resonated sound, good 
Quite nice, but the high pitching noise becommes annoying.
2.25/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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01-02-2005 15:50 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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New version in the works right now! I used fruity loops to make this one but now i mostly use acid pro. I've opened it up in acid and I started messin with the amen..any suggestions would help!
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04-03-2005 09:48 |
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Dj_Rinse
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Registration Date: 01-04-2005
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I like your drop and your thickening bass build up...thats all good... however your intro be4 that is not great definatly needs alot of work....nice amens....the pitch bending is cool but maybe a little forced in some places?not so much at the begining or the main riff but more like just be4 3/4 of way through...
kool track thou does convay "dark planet" well.nice 1 (2.5/3) /5 needs work but good ideas.
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01-04-2005 18:28 |
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