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MrNibbles 
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Hey people, this is a work in progress track,
the vocals are from the Ghost in the Shell - Stand Alone Complex manga series... so not the usual then.
I quite like it, got some intersting progression to it.
If people like it! i will make it longer, better, harder 
Enjoy
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http://www.mediamann.com/Ants/my%20sprit.wma
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26-01-2005 19:27 |
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Sonix
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I like it.
The vocals could do with a dose of EQ. Put more mid and bass into her voice, if you can. If the high pass filtered drums at the start are wrapped around the vocals, ie on the same sample, try EQing after the high pass or use Cool Edit to strip them out completely. (If not forgive me.)
When the drums drop, the contrast between them and the vocals is too severe. It may be down to my speakers, but I think it could do with more punch in her voice.
Bassline is sweet, but it needs a midline to compliment the vocals.
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Need to lose another 5 microseconds.
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27-01-2005 05:38 |
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MrNibbles
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THanks man, thats exactly the kinda feedback im looking for.
i know the EQ is a bit strange, but its my own rip of the track and i found it pretty hard to subtract vocals from the original, hence the nasty EQing
I have better work!
Check out a couple more of my tracks over at www.mediamann.com/Ants
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27-01-2005 21:20 |
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Sonix
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6546476464654654. This is pretty fresh man. Love it when it drops near the end, quite AphexTwinish in places. Shame it ends so soon after it really gets going. 
Earth. Nice dreamy intro. Drums are good and work well with the feel of the tune. Again not long enough but my fav of all I think.
asdfadrf-revisit nointro. Nice melody, again quite Aphex Twininsh with the drum programming. Bassline? I can't tell if there is one, but maybe use 1/4 or 1/2 a bar of the melody, stretched over 1 or 2 bars an octave or two down.
attackey. Piano seems too loud in the mix, needs sitting down to compliment the drums and give the vocal more head room. Cheeky use of Feeling Good BTW. Deff need to turn the piano chords down, they seem to detract from the chilledness of the tune, maybe more/improved compression on it would sort it.
Good work none the less. Heh playing my spirit again and it deff needs that EQ and the vocal sample rescuing from it's own drum track.
Have you got Cool Edit Pro? The noise reduction system in CEP would help you alot to clean that sample up.
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Need to lose another 5 microseconds.
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28-01-2005 03:52 |
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Surora23
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dude really nice vocals...really nice...love em...dont realylliek the drop though...sounds a bit trancy so the bass could be a hover with the same melody and would sounds much better...your drums needs to be boosted...very very short...try cutting up the vocals and making verses and a chorus for the track...really good idea...some sounds need work...but keep it up...
4/track
2.5/sounds
3/5
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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28-01-2005 04:29 |
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MrNibbles
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Cheers for the tips guys! 6546476464654654 is my personal favourite, only because its newer than earth 
I will get to work and hopefully you can check them out after ive had a fiddle with them....
Thanks again
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28-01-2005 05:11 |
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MrNibbles
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oh and BTW thanks for the aphex comments
hes my idol
him and squarepusher....
and kid606.....
oh shit theres loads more...
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28-01-2005 05:16 |
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Sonix
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Originally posted by MrNibbles
oh and BTW thanks for the aphex comments
hes my idol
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Ditto mate, Richard James & Mike Paradinas are my main influences in all my music. Amazing producers.
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Need to lose another 5 microseconds.
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28-01-2005 07:03 |
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Surya
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Quite nice, but too trancey for my taste?
Bassline could use a bit more roughtness... and a sub.
Drums are quite punchy, which is nice.
A bit short, no?
2.25/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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