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T.roll 
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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Distant Creation [vip]' and post your comments here!!!
Not sure about mastering... Suggestions highly appreciated
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25-01-2005 08:02 |
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broadside
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Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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nice intro, nice tune.
beat a little bit too rough -for want of a better word - to make this tune as skankable as it deserves to be. wicked vibe, complex, don't know shit about mastering, but it sounds cool to me. nice1.
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25-01-2005 18:40 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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Registration Date: 25-01-2005
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Nice ambience. I think that bass is almost a tad bit too crunchy. I really like the little drum roll you did on the drop there. I think this one definatly needs a heavier, bassier kick in it. Also I would add some sub bass on top of the existing bass line you got goin' on there. I really like the sound of things here at 4:26, sounds ill. Again, that kick needs to be bassier to give the drop more punch.
Sounds good so far man, gj
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25-01-2005 18:40 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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like the bongo things
great tension in the intro
crazy sound and very cool goa like melody
don't like youre snare u use .
3.5/5
cheers
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25-01-2005 20:02 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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man thats a qicked intro i like the teasers of drum hits nice touch'
the bass seems a little crunchy specially the hits in the beginning....
man this intro is long there we go.. reminds me of old jo-s stuff (mainframe) really a techish feel to it. kinda makes the song a little stiff... you know very rigid feeling
the synths and sounds are very nice my suggestion is to loosen upa bit... it all seems so rigids the only word i can think of.
watch your bass pushing on the other sounds... and thast snare needs to be toned down some
other than that keeep em coming..
opeace :!:
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26-01-2005 00:50 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Nice cranked out bongos - a few sounds might need lowering a bit in the intro/compressed perhaps. The reverb on the hi mid synth should have the hi cut turned down a touch. Very nice evil little twists and touches to the envelope on that lead and bass. Snare drum is not distinct enough on my speakers - perhaps a bit too low and crunchy. Tons of stuff going on here. Nice roll before second drop and great tremlo on the sound when it comes back!!! 
Filtered drums are music to my ears. The actual drop is close but maybe one too many sounds and the beat sounds a bit cluttered here. Same wicked variation and painstaking work here as your last one - but sound is a bit too crunched out or something. Ending should have the lead brought back for one last go at it.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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26-01-2005 00:58 |
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camo
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Yeah, the intro is really good! Its cool when the bass drops!Uhhhh, and the melody is awesome. The snares are a bit too hard, and the drums more loud.
The part from 2,50 to 2,50 is also awesome!. i like the bassline! Allover the track is a little too hardfor my taste, but without a question a nice tune!!!!!!!!!
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26-01-2005 11:56 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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very rough intro, nice gritty bass.
build-up is very tense and hard.
But don't like what happens next.
The snare is too much..
It's very chaotic from here on.
Some good breaks and effects.
The track just doesn't speak to me, not my style.
3/5
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26-01-2005 18:06 |
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Moody F
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Registration Date: 13-01-2005
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Starting up u're tune does me feel like wakin' up 
in certain RAM Trilogy - Molten Beats tracks.
Kinda same cranced up afterbeat structure,
with strong bass, and overall sound like ure's!
Imo u certainly have the gutz 'n' skillz 
to produce
a complex track like this one, without losing the
'storyline' in it..;
there's a certain exciting threat and tension about
Creationz and Thingz..! 
Ya! Love it when listening a track comes together
with a lot to visualize!!
Piece of 4/5 Art!
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26-01-2005 19:32 |
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Stutterstep
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Registration Date: 27-01-2005
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Nice track. I would not worry about mastering that much. Maybe a limiter on the final mix or a EQ, but mastering is a art in its self,let the guys with $20,000 dollar compressor do that. That little drum roll is very nice, maybe loop it in the middle some where quickly. I like the track
respect!!!!
Stutterstep
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27-01-2005 23:53 |
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B-complex
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Registration Date: 07-04-2004
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I like the intro, I was always a fan of overdriven sounds 
, 1:35 drop and here we go, I don't feel the sub bass it's very "wide" far from tight, try to use some 808 kickdrum samples for it, drums sounds a bit thin I don't like the snare try to process it or use different sound. Arrangements are well done it has nice atmosphere but overall sound drops it down, it's not question of mastering, it should be mixed better and this is something no mastering studio will do for you.
overall 2.5/5 good work, that could be done better.
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28-01-2005 11:18 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Well, main comments will be on the sound, since that's what you want:
- Bats a bit too loud and sharp sounding
- Bass lacking, boost that 60hz!
- Snare is nice but seems to be just too late every hit, maybe the sample needs editing?
- Overall your drums could use a bit more punch.
- Overall your sound is quite synthetic, which I'm not a big fan of.
Quite nice track, but the sound needs some work.
2.5/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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