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*Izah*
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Registration Date: 02-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Stationary' and post your comments here!!!
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24-01-2005 23:00 |
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Nosrac 
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Nice stuff just before the main beat comes in - but I think that amen sounding cut should be a bit louder. Hi hats and a bit crispy(?) imo. Nice drop!! Great combo of the bass and the digital(?) sound over top - they blend very nicely. The keyboard that comes in over top should be chorused or panned to fill it out a bit more. This tune rolls so nicely! Second drop seems a whole lot darker - cool sample - reminds me of "venus" off hardleaders 3? Perhaps another element should be added in the second drop - a big powerful off beat synth perhaps (hear second half of T. rolls latest). Good clear sound quality with some powerful bass hits. Just add a bit more variation in the drums etc.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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25-01-2005 02:47 |
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Nosrac
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Oh, crap - disregard that last review - it was meant for Illuminati's song. Sorry, got the "I" names mixed up.
With regards to "stationary": some nice big sounds to intro but nothing compared to that bass - omfg HUGE!!! The little amen before is quiet and wimpy sounding, which I guess is the point so the drop sounds enormous. The bass pitch-up sweep sound is another gem - and the higher pitch down sweep, too. The limited number of sounds you used here are very well chosen and go very well with each other. The broken up bass line hits later should maybe come in earlier cause they are awesome. Perhaps a few too many pauses, but otherwise a damn heavy track - nice work bro.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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25-01-2005 02:56 |
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*Izah*
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thanks man 
please rate my track to show your appreciation.. or your dislike ofcourse..
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25-01-2005 11:42 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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Nice, Im liking the intro on this one. The amen could be turned up a tad. Nice drop. I think that beat would sound a little more phat if you layered another break on top of it try one of the Dave Akuma breaks. Maybe an extra, more bassy, kick on top of the existing one to add more punch to it. im loving that mettalic hit your using there, sounds like a black smith bangin away on a chunk of steel. And what bass sample are you using? i like it.
All in all, nice track! just needs to be beefed up a lil, imo...
Boh!
ohh yeah, arn't i supposed to rate it or somthin'? i'll give this one a 3/5 ....
Did I do that right??
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25-01-2005 18:31 |
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Nosrac
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26-01-2005 14:53 |
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kareem
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heavy intro.
Nice beats, nice and hard.
Like the gritty basses.
nice breaks, not a very danceable track but nice.
Like the twist at 2min40.
Nice track!
3,5/5
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26-01-2005 18:01 |
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Surora23
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nice intro...kind of minimall...i like the drums...my kind of feel...nice reverb on them...ooo nice bass...when it drops i think teh drums could be much more chaotic...mroe snares and hats going on...the track starts to get a little boring...you could use some more melodies in there some where...a diff bass hti maybe...and the drop is very minial which is cool and scary...but i think you could have some mnroe sfx in there or soemthing...good stuff...i liked this...if it was polished i would deffinitely play this out...cheers..
3/track
4/5 sounds
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28-01-2005 04:39 |
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kaliyuga
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yeah alright overall . but very same old nothing new nothing stands out. well mixed but sounds need 2 b phat. remind s me of goin 2 c dilinja. same shit all the time. make me go to sleep if i was on the dance floor and heard this. better luck next time.
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29-01-2005 00:45 |
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dNk
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Registration Date: 29-02-2004
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man its wonderful track , big big big UP !
Dont see serious mystakes all sounds good , producing 4 , but i give u 5
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29-01-2005 11:43 |
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Surya
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Glad to hear you're making good use of my samples
Very cool basis again, you have great ideas!
Having a switch in the drums every 2 measures would be wickid.
Try putting more efford in your intros and breakdowns though, coz they are mostly unintresting fillers.
The biggest problem with your tracks is the sound though. Very thin. Make them basslines kick ass, make those drums pump! This is agressive music, make it sound agressive!
Good basis, but it could be so much better.
2.5/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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31-01-2005 13:15 |
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this one works it. its like the bass is tryin to tell you something, something like I got the fantasitical BASS force the fuck on! AIGHT AIGHT keep it up!
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“For the moment anyway, political philosophy is dead”
— Peter Laslett, Philosophy, Politics and Society (1950)
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