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broadside 
mentalist
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'U'n'I ' and post your comments here!!!
Actually got my little brother singing on this! A "few" sound probs, listners advised to take protective measures for their ear drums , so unfnished product but what think you?
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24-01-2005 22:48 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Nice big opening sound! The vocals sound great - big up to your bro. Some of the cuts are a bit rough - make sure they are properly quantized and maybe add delay to the whole track so the cuts aren't as noticable. When it drops there is a lot of clipping and distortion. Second drop (just before end) is very nice and a lot less distortion - heavy sounding bass drum. Keep up the good work - you're learning fast. Abrupt ending but I assume this is unfinished.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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25-01-2005 03:11 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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LOL funny vocals.
good advice for echo tracks, only do the last word.
ya, try to fade the end of the sample to remove the click.
wicked song dude. i love the vocals, i did that with my sister one time too. but your prother has given it a pretty good try.
i am feeling this track!
i love noise.
but honestly you can just use a clipper, and a limiter.
fuck thoes vocals really add a lovley sound to it. the humming,
LOOOOOL
GREAT FINISH.
he's got a voice that works well.
kicking track. i love the bass.
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26-01-2005 07:44 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Quite nice intro, sounds big!
Vocal i nice but a bit too dry the first time, and a bit too wet the second time.
It's too loud anyway.
Drop: awtch! Clipping like hell man. Whach them levels when doing the mixdown!
Anyway: snare needs work, and so do the hats (you can hardly hear them). And oh my gosh, that is a godawfull kick man!
Quite nice idear, with that vocal, but the music itself is quite boring. Them same trance strings the whole time, gets a bit repetetive...
1.75/5 for the track
1/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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31-01-2005 13:11 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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this song rocks, i want to say again after listening to it again.
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15-02-2005 18:12 |
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Capsacium
Producer
Registration Date: 11-02-2005
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levels, levels, clipping! but you've probably heard enough of that.
well written track for sure. Nice vocals. The vocal sampling in the intro needs to be arranged a bit differn't it doesn't flow from about '45 to 50.
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24-02-2005 19:16 |
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