 Rude - Make me ! (extended version) |
Rude 
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Make me ! (extended version)' and post your comments here!!!
bigger, longer, and ... louder?
edit by thechronic:
This track has been deleted on Rude's request.
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22-01-2005 18:36 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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it's like minute soup, put it in your stereo, wait 2 minutes, then enjoy
RESPECT 
see ya
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22-01-2005 20:16 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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2 minutes for a minute soup. NO WAY! i'd rather starve to near death only to quit before i get killed thus not losing and keeping all my Equipment and Experiance.
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anyhooo...
try to make variations every 4 or 8 bars. there what define your tracks.
*breakdances*
i like this song.
soups done. weird ending. should usually keep it consistant at the end of tracks.
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23-01-2005 02:49 |
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echo virus
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Weird track don't really know what to think...
Some pieces I do like other I don't 
I'll try to post a decent reply later on (busy at the moment)
One tip: There's a bass sample in it that's not cut properly at the beginning I think, it clicks at every start... Open that sample in Wavelab or soundforge or somthing and cut them clean... You'll probably see that it start with a waveform that's up or down, it should always start when the waveform is at it's minimum, before going up... Here's a graphic of what I mean, maybe easier to see what I mean
Hope this helps Keep it up ! 
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23-01-2005 12:49 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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Originally posted by echo virus
Weird track don't really know what to think...
Some pieces I do like other I don't
I'll try to post a decent reply later on (busy at the moment)
One tip: There's a bass sample in it that's not cut properly at the beginning I think, it clicks at every start... Open that sample in Wavelab or soundforge or somthing and cut them clean... You'll probably see that it start with a waveform that's up or down, it should always start when the waveform is at it's minimum, before going up... Here's a graphic of what I mean, maybe easier to see what I mean
Hope this helps Keep it up !
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YUP !!!
thanks for the advise
see yaaaaa
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23-01-2005 13:01 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Indeed, the clicking thing is annoying.
Intro: starting with a bassline like that is... erm... not a conventional way to start a track. Try starting with a real intro.
The Coldsweat drumloop sounds like it's just a tiny bit too fast. Try cutting it up and rearanging it too 
Same goes for the tramen: there's a gap after each time the loop is played.
Sound: sounds to me you didn't EQ anything, you just played every sample just as it is. Use EQs to enhance the sound.
The basslines need more bass. And sub.
The effect @ 3.40 is out of place and too loud.
This track is quite repetetive due to the small amount of elements used. Try adding more stuff
1.25/5 for the track
1/5 for the sound
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28-01-2005 13:30 |
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spudleyq
Master Producer
Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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*bobs his head back and forth*
You have potential....that's all I'm going to say for this one.
Read Surya's review for everything you need to know that's wrong with this song.
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28-01-2005 14:48 |
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