 stino - GiVe HeAd ( preview) |
stino 
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Registration Date: 13-07-2003
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Please check out my new track 'GiVe HeAd ( preview)' and post your comments here!!!
new P*rn*graphic tune of mine
not finished,
please comment on sound thanks !
I think this is my best sound until now... might be wrong though...
snare is my biggest concern!
thanks geezers
and are you supposed to give me head ?
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www.myspace.com/stinomg
www.myspace.com/circlelogicband
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20-01-2005 19:36 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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20-01-2005 19:47 |
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broadside
mentalist
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
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hoovering it up . . . metaphorically
maybe add a drone of some kind under said tune that kicks in at 1:34 cos that would fill it out a bit and smooth it up.
s'all about that melody tho yeah? if i'd have come up with a tune like that i would have been tempted to be a bit less restrained, and go for some real intense drops and percussion.
this tune has got wicked potential
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20-01-2005 21:00 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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what is idd?
WOA, i thought this song blew cuz fo thoes horrible snares in the start but now its rocked with the cool give me head sample. something about the bass makes it seem almost pop-ish. good none the less. find a new snare. for the start, or better yet, KILL IT.
the dripping, is cool, the lead synth, that goes with the bass. i likey with it.
the end's choppy, but, you'll deal with that no doubt.
cool song, nice biscut.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 21-01-2005 00:30.
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21-01-2005 00:13 |
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tetsuo
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Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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I won't .....
The drum part is really good, the snare is a bit too dry imo.... Good flow at 2.45, the bell in the bground might be too high sometime. Nice drop back at 3.43, maybe need xtra energie to pump it a bit more.
Nice potential, another bass line would be nice imo, look forward to hear the finished version 
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21-01-2005 15:20 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Ya, the intro does not justify the huge clear sounding drop here - work on that. Good clear sample and really nice sounds at the drop 0 a touch more sub perhaps - following but not perfectly matching the reece - like a Boom, boom - boom! at each pause. Let the reece just without large pauses in parts to give this tune a flowing sound to contrast the choppy bits. The snare just needs another dry, punchy slightly low pitch snare to put over top of it. Rework and I'll rate the next.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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23-01-2005 12:19 |
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stino
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Registration Date: 13-07-2003
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bump!
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27-01-2005 16:40 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Intro is ok. Buildup is nice but a bit too long.
Drop: nice bassline. Drums lack power though. Don't really like the snare and the ghosts kinda suck. Some phatter hats and rides would be nice too.
The waterdrop sounds in the background are nice, but I'm not sure they fit.
Overall the track still sounds a bit empty, try phattening up the drums to make it sound fuller.
Try adding some other stuff too, coz now you essentially have only 4 elements (strings, waterdrops, bassline and drums) which isn't enough to give enough depth.
2.25/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-01-2005 13:10 |
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GeeZZ
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this tune cud b a roller iam feelin the main melody its the littel breaks of silence between notes that make it fat
beef up the sounds in the intro by layering diff mo exciting synths on top of wot u got , same wiv the main lic
n the intro drums a bit lame
like that main riff pumpin
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17-04-2007 00:57 |
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