 Rude - I'll try (with added bassline) |
Rude 
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Please check out my new track 'I'll try (with added bassline)' and post your comments here!!!
Great news ! I was able to add a bassline to the song WITHOUT CRASHING!!!
lol
It's thesame song as I'll try, but when it drops, there's a new bassline in it. So go ahead and judge it now it's complete !!!
thanks for the comments --> usefull
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19-01-2005 14:04 |
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Rude
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I'd like to become a pro...
how the f is that possible?
keep up with the comments and stuff like that, I appreciate your advise 
Does someone know where you could download a better program then magix??
anyone???
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19-01-2005 14:34 |
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broadside
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Still too long without the bass, we finally get it at two minutes, which would be fine if it was one long build up to that, but it isn't.
I would suggest having multiple - bizarre ending by the way - bass lines - so like after the buzzy sound which just mirrors the orchestral crash thing (if thats what it is, its a cool sound) have a few sublow quick responses too it. You need builds and drops and more stuff going on, and more form to the song. If I was you then I would go 'back to the lab' for a little while before you post another, and maybe just try imitating a few profesional tracks as closely as possible because that forces you to face technical issues and then you use that on your own tune.
Singing from the same hymn sheet about downloading programs, but I got a mac (big mistake) which makes it twice as hard to get hold of that kind of thing it seems. Should be easy to get hold of something like fruity loops for pc, they dont even do it for mac, but that program is heavyweight. All the best, broadside.
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19-01-2005 17:18 |
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thefunke1
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Regarding the crashing... which is a problem, and for sure limits your creative ideas..... Depending upon the sequencer you are using you can "Freeze" tracks, which free's up space. This is availible on Logic 6 or higher I beleive, or on Cubase sx 2 or higher. I have not used any other sequencers, so I don't know what they offer.
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19-01-2005 19:18 |
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charleskoncept
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Well it sounds like you got your timning on your beats down i think or maybe that was someone else... there just isnt enough going on to keep it interesting
its like a tommy knowcker track...
i dont know man it needs a lot of work A LOT
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19-01-2005 19:19 |
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stickbubbly
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nice break loop but you should try chopping it up a bit to make the song more interesting. the track gets boring pretty fast.
needs some sub bass.
the drum beat at the end rules!
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19-01-2005 20:48 |
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Halph-Price
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not even regarding the track but how to get good sounding music is try to copy a song you like. it doesn't matter that it's not creative you'll inheriantly add yuor own flavour to it regardless, a lot of major songs came from emulations of other artists. it's hard to copy them sometimes, and that's why it's good practice because it is a challenge.
also learn about the tequinces, good reads is basic structure so then yuo know what to call the different parts of their songs, just look around on the net, it helps a lot.
the bassline came in way too late dude... you can have a little bass int he start, it usually when hihats start up or a real break starts to flow, not at the last drop.
you get a more beefy bass during the drops. that bassline is need int he start to keep it interesting.
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19-01-2005 21:17 |
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Rude
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I don't have good bass stuff!
I mean goooood bass stuff
see ya
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20-01-2005 17:03 |
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Rude
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just rate the god-damn song will ya
lol
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20-01-2005 17:31 |
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Surora23
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20-01-2005 18:14 |
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Surora23
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also how the hell did this song get so many damn hits when she just started on this site!?!?!?!?!?!? 
really confused on that one...especially since all the reviews say the track blows...no offense, but wow!?!?!thanks kind of a shocker
keep practicing!
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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20-01-2005 18:40 |
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Halph-Price
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cuz there's been a lot fo songs by rude, and we wanna see (if there is any) improvments.
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20-01-2005 18:45 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
cuz there's been a lot fo songs by rude, and we wanna see (if there is any) improvments. |
3 songs, 3 days...no offense to the young lady
but thatd be some damn quik improvement! not syaing its impossible though 
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Rinse it OUT!!!!
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20-01-2005 18:50 |
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Surya
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Choir sounds are nice, but maybe a bit too much reverb. Make sure some of the original dry signal comes though a bit too.
Amen: just a simple amen loop. Chop it up and rearange it to give some variation.
Bassline comes in: sounds too digital. Give it some distoriton. And boost it's low end, coz there's no bass in the bassline now!
What BPM is this track? Sounds a bit slow
Anyway, the choir is a nice start for a track, but you need much more to make it a real track. Dums lots of stuff in there: other drums, one or 2 more basslines, atmospherics, strings or pads...
Nice idear, but as a track it's not good.
1/5 for the track
1/5 for the sound
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27-01-2005 15:52 |
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rocker555
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hi , well i have the latest magix music maker 2005 deluxe and it rulz the world so dont say that this is a shitty program ok? ;-)
p.s. the older ones are good, too. greetz from rockah555
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04-02-2005 18:25 |
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Surya
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Originally posted by rocker555
hi , well i have the latest magix music maker 2005 deluxe and it rulz the world so dont say that this is a shitty program ok? ;-)
p.s. the older ones are good, too. greetz from rockah555 |
OK, you're clearly asking for it: MUSIC MAKER IS UTTER CRAP 
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05-02-2005 10:39 |
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Rude
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Originally posted by rocker555
hi , well i have the latest magix music maker 2005 deluxe and it rulz the world so dont say that this is a shitty program ok? ;-)
p.s. the older ones are good, too. greetz from rockah555 |
(read the quote on this one in the last version of "i'll try")
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