XTensionTrigger 
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Registration Date: 04-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'NO! by mar' and post your comments here!!!
Opinions are expected.
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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18-01-2005 19:37 |
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Halph-Price
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you want my opnion eh... lemme juzz tell YEH! that YOOOOOoooouuuuUUUuuu arrrgh the beegggst peiCE oh shiiiiiiii theeeeee ....
But really,
THAT BEGINING IS AMAZING. when he says no and then it explodes liek such. 
it sounds cheesy when you do the echo with it, though. just leave it next time. it had it's moment.
you need a bridge at 2:50.
maybe spice up the re-intro when you bring the vocals back again.
the track lacks and variation in the bassline. it's repatcious. still it's got some good beats to it.
ooh, try making the re-intro vocals stutter or sputter a bit, Granulize.
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18-01-2005 22:30 |
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broadside
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Pure madness! Love it mate. As said before fantastic begining, dont mind the 'no's' repetition so much, thought it was going to be a bit boring with just the one weak bass line, the ascending three notes, but then you come in with thing on 1:23 that is completely heavy. On a purely personal level, I would have felt tempted to roll with that a bit longer, and maybe allowed all those breaks, but I realise thats a style thing and a lot of people love that. Anyway, great track nuff said.
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19-01-2005 00:30 |
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charleskoncept
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vanilla sky! hmm good flick your drums sound kinda flat but this is just the intro...it is kinda head boppish stuff ....
i like your break and the deat that follows afterward....very heavy....i cant think of anything i dont like yet... your breaks are little hard
your basses and your sub blend well together....
there is a distinct lack of any atmosphere or maybe i ust cant hear it...
peace 
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19-01-2005 19:28 |
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thefunke1
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The intro is great :-) Also some very nice drum work, great little bounce to it. The bass line needs a little work although I like the change up at 1:23. The snare used is a nice sound. I like the break beat style to the song, just need to add a little more feeling the the melody, but the drums are fun!!
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20-01-2005 00:53 |
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Vice
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Nice Track. Sounds clean all around, but i definately get bored of the main bassine pretty quickly. I'm more of a fan of moreso melodic/atmospheric tunes and thats where i think this song is surely lacking.
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21-01-2005 00:28 |
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zebediah
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Very cool intro!
The beats sound like there a bit too distorted. Definitely some good drum werk goin on in this tune. I think there may even be too many different kits. Definitely kept it interesting tho ... tho ... tho ... tho ... The drums at moments were punishing! I like the variations.
Didn't mind the echoes too much ... maybe even an outrageous chorus on one of them would be cool.
Bassline could be tweaked a bit more to help the tune roll. Very nice bass sound.
You got some fresh ideas goin on ... I'll checkin out some more your work in the near future.
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Let the bass kick!!
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21-01-2005 10:49 |
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tetsuo
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Nice stuff man, the mastering need xtra attention on the drum as there are really present, and on the bass line at 2.50 and so on, probably what halph said earlier
The stuct is ok to me, really good building up
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21-01-2005 15:47 |
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Surya
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Very nice introsample!
The ColdSweat sound a bit weird, as it were fucked up by some deep sub or something.
Some cool switches
Basslines aren't that intresting though, just some humming going on.
Some intresting idears, but not good enough to stay intresting.
2.25/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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27-01-2005 15:43 |
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thechronic
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Track removed, contained copyrighted samples from the movie 'Vanilla Sky'
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