 Rude - Megabass |
Rude 
I'm gonna get you
Registration Date: 06-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Megabass' and post your comments here!!!
again, little humdrum...
again, made with samples of this site
again, relax while listening to this song
but, go ahead and tell me what you think about it
edit by thechronic:
Track removed on Rude's request
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16-01-2005 20:12 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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your breaks are way off....dont really liek this at all...has no structure...sorry...imho...it kind of suckss....no ofense but try not to post unless you are more confident about the track...
its not good...but agian you are jsut starting so no hard feelings...
keep practiing!
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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16-01-2005 21:04 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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drum and BASS!
you forgot a bass....
oh and it's too loud
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17-01-2005 13:16 |
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marine289
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Originally posted by Surora23
your breaks are way off....dont really liek this at all...has no structure...sorry...imho...it kind of suckss....no ofense but try not to post unless you are more confident about the track...
its not good...but agian you are jsut starting so no hard feelings...
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I couldn't agree more.
Just dont post any more songs for about a month, and practice reeeeaaaaallly hard, and then when you are confident about a track, post it here.
I started about 4.5 months ago, and I would be absolutely ashamed if I would post these tracks now.
Also: listen to a lot of music (dnb and non-dnb) and
try to make some good tunes.
Because Im sure, that when you check out a professional song, and compare it to this, you cant say that your song is even a tenth as good as it.
Im sorry I have to be this harsh, but you are not going to get anywhere when people say to you that this tune is wicked.
just keep practicing and practicing and practicing and one day you'll make a good song where you can be proud of.
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17-01-2005 18:00 |
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charleskoncept
Wicked Producer
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ouch... man this is way off of any base.... watch your levels.. your ready to kill my sub. very slow moving
a l m o s t
s n a i l
l i k e
p e a c e :1;
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17-01-2005 21:52 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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you know i think he might be a bit right.
if you turned the clipping down....
cuz it's not fast enoguh for dnb, but slow enough for rappin. 
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18-01-2005 04:46 |
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Gavner
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its just totally unprofessional, random as f**k and has no structure or buildup to anything at all, i cant say that i like anything about it...
Yeh the drum loop is either out of sync or u got ur snares in random places, needs a LOT of tidying up before you should even consider putting anything like that up, seriously....
And I only bin producin dnb bout 6 monoths, i know my tracks are still prob unsuitable / unprofessional but I am confident enough that I will get some ok feedback as the track I am to upload is madun that i am gona go re-do if i get enough support / feedback on here or from a label..
I would jus keep practising m8, u wil get there... and yeah everything sounds distorted.. keep ur levels below -6db before you master it...
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18-01-2005 13:43 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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23-01-2005 16:40 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Your leadsound sounds too dry again. Give it delay and reverb.
The drums don't rollllll, work on that. Also, again you have a gap after each mesure. The amen that is layered under it needs work too.
Bass is quite agressive, but some slight distortion to give it a more natural sound would be nice.
You recorded thisone too loud, the sound clips like hell.
Again, this sounds a lot like the work of a beginning producer and again the structure kinda sucks (no buildup of tention followed by release or anything) and you need more elements too fill it up
1/5 for the track
1/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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