stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'new stark ' and post your comments here!!!
I made this track with a producer that goes by the name stutter step. We didnt have much time to work together so we kept it simple.
It was made with logic.
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14-01-2005 21:37 |
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dj2lip
Producer
Registration Date: 31-12-2004
Posts: 13
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nice intro,
i like the first 2 drum patterns that start at 0:20, because they are very clear.
the pattern after the build-up imo is too stressful and lacks the structure of the first ones.
the subbass is excellent!
in general i found the track a bit short.
still nice work so far!
cheers
2lip
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14-01-2005 22:08 |
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camo
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
Posts: 346
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Hi!
i like ya track, but i think i would like to hear more changes, like a part with strings or a sample or something.
nice bassline
nice tune
nice to hear good work
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keepin it rollin`
www.myspace.com/camopdj
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15-01-2005 02:17 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Once again, a very smooth track with tons of attention to detail. Great work with the filters throughout such as the synths in the intro, subtle drum filters at the end of bars etc. The best filtering is barely noticeable. The thunder(?) at the begining sounds more like crackling, at least in my headphones. The intro to "black sabbath" by black sabbath or "reigning blood" by slayer both have really big sounding thunder. LIke the bass line - but for this style of track it could use a bit more distortion and punch imo, perhaps by having the bass drum hit on the ossilations. LOve the other smaller sound that joins the bass at 1:30. Drum beat is solid with nice subtle variation on the snare, but it could use some variation, perhaps where it matchs the bass from time to time like you did on snake charmer and at 3:42 (Nice!). All levels are perfect, but with this killer bass line I think this should be mixed more like a metalheadz track instead of a pendulum track - open it up the sounds, don't use as much compression on whole tracks (if you are doing that?). The ending needs some work. This is a worthy addition to your library of tracks, and like only a few other producers on here (myself not included) you have a distinct and recognizable sound so don't stray too far from it (despite what I'm saying about sounds etc. - that's just in my opinion).
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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15-01-2005 16:58 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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i like this song, it's clean in a phat way. not in a dry way.
good use of filters, on everything. gives it very liquid feel. there's a cool trance lead that gives it some nice variety.
the repetitius vocals are okay. i like the off-world-colony quote. glad to see it used.
this song isn't a high mover but it's a good song to drive too.
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15-01-2005 21:39 |
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tetsuo
Guiness factory
Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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Great buil up, the voices are awesome, nice switch in basses line, maybe a lack of new sound whe it kik bak at 3.10..... nice track, nothing to say about mastering, need xtra drum variation imo...
goodies
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Yesterday' s futur is today!! 
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16-01-2005 19:45 |
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thefunke1
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 09-12-2004
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Let me start off by saying it's a pleasure to finally review one of your songs.
I really enjoyed the intro, it has a great build up, and a really nice atmosphere about it, as well the vocal samples tie in very nicely, although I found the intro a little long.
Once the meat of the song kicks in it's fantastic, listening to your other productions, your attention to detail and levels is amazing.
I would agree with other posts that it lacks variety, and the base line begins to become repetative after a while, although that's only to offer some constructive criticism.
As with the other songs you have posted, your sound is very clean, no unrequired noises, or sounds, just right to the point!!
Overall another great job!!! I know that you will continue to work on this, and I look forward to hearing your next rendition!!!
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www.acidplanet.com
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18-01-2005 23:38 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is nice. Maybe make the trance stabs a bit louder?
Drop: nice punchy drums and pumping bassline. Cool. maybe add some phatter hihats?
Theme is less intresting than in Alien Chapter though, but well produced.
I would make the kick and snare a bit louder and give the snare a bit more hi-end.
Nice track, but it could use a bit more power, dunno, Alien Chapter had a better drive going on than thisone...
3.25/5 for the track
3/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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26-01-2005 18:58 |
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