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*Izah*
Producer
Registration Date: 02-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Caution' and post your comments here!!!
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14-01-2005 19:27 |
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stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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cool track. nice sounds. the drums and sub seem a bit too quiet. its a good track but i think its still needs more layers. seems a bit empty. nice melody.
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14-01-2005 19:43 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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cool intro...nice sounds...drums are a tad thin...boost those bad boys up...alright...drums are atad louder...sounding cool...oh i like that reece!...waiting for drop...(maybe make it a little sooner)...the sample synth you have under your melody sounds disharmonic...retune it...i like that tramen hits...melody is deffinitely cool on the reece...but you dont have enough melodies to keep it interesting...addd some more stuff in there and this could be top...
keep it up...
3/track
2.5/sounds
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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14-01-2005 20:33 |
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tetsuo
Guiness factory
Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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nice start,well done......
The basses are awesome, don't like too much that key sound, but that' s my taste, and one of the snare sound really metal
Nice construction so far, maybe compact it a bit more, like the overall
track 3/5
sound 4/5
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15-01-2005 10:40 |
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peet
Steppa
Registration Date: 31-01-2004
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nice intro man, i love african tom drums. drums are good. bassline could be lowered A LOT in the mix man. people still hear it when it's down. oh and it needs some more sub. yeh but i really like the drums.
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15-01-2005 14:21 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Nice intro, good bongo sounds, very bright and nice touch of reverb. Ya, sub could be louder. Try filtering in the first hit of the big lead line - don't give it away all at once. Nice build up and filtering there! Bass drum and whole kit in general needs a bit more punch to accompany this huge bass/lead sound. Great sound! Very nice phasing (?) going on there. The amen snips come in very nicely! - but when they're gone it underlines the lack of punch in your programmed drums. Nice build up to to the second dop but a bit too similar to the first drop. LOve the hats!! The sound that can be heard at 5:35 is very nice - bring that up - play with offbeats with that one! Bring the bass up, beef up the drums (distortion perhaps) work on a variation in the second drop and this will be an excellent tune. For now 3.5/5
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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15-01-2005 17:43 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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guess I have nothing more to say about the intro!
it starts so soft....it almost touched me....
ur bass is fat!
ur drums are nice, but could use some work!
3.14 - 3.37 is a bit boring...u should build it up faster...
it's nice! 3/5
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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18-01-2005 10:49 |
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Gavner
Newbie
Registration Date: 17-01-2005
Posts: 7
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ye i like it a lot, sound production... nice bass and synthlines going on, could do with a tad more variationn and impact but other than that it is a stomper!
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18-01-2005 15:10 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is nice, well constructed.
Nice clear drums kicking in.
Bassline teaser: sounds a bit too loud to me.
Drop: indeed, basslines are too loud but don't have enough bass (especially the first one).
Switching is quite good.
Ah, breakdown again. Body felt a bit too short. Make it longer!
About the drums: the metalic snare is nice, but your hats sounds a bit mechanic, and the snares don't have enough punch. And in this style you need plenty of ghostsnares to get everything going.
So, basically a quite good basis, but still needs a lot of work
2.5/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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