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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Please check out my new track 'Bombshelter (preview)' and post your comments here!!!
This is something ive been working on for about a day...i think its a little over compressed...but what do yua think so far?
Edit by Surya: New version here
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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14-01-2005 01:34 |
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fogboy
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sounds cool i like it. after the drop it seems to go a bit quieter tho like somthin is missing 
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14-01-2005 01:58 |
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Halph-Price
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14-01-2005 02:08 |
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tetsuo
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cool man, love the voices and sci fi noises, dark
good build up so far, kik a bit too present, love the lead in the bground but the other one sound trany to me
best tune u made for me
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14-01-2005 13:57 |
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Halph-Price
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trany? like transexual?
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14-01-2005 16:35 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
trany? like transxual? |
lol i think he meant trancy
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14-01-2005 17:29 |
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tetsuo
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
trany? like transxual? |
lol i think he meant trancy |
INDEED 
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14-01-2005 17:49 |
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Halph-Price
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i know. 
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14-01-2005 17:51 |
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Rude
I'm gonna get you
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the begin-tune sounds like it doesn't run with the beat
anyway, couldn't do it better 
nice job
4/5
(-1 for the doesn't-fit-tune lol)
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14-01-2005 17:57 |
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spudleyq
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6/5 for using my samples!!
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Click on the pic above to visit my music profile on Myspace.
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14-01-2005 18:46 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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6/5 for using my samples!! |
cheers 
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14-01-2005 18:53 |
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stickbubbly
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the intro has a nice feel to it. I like the drum rolls
i think you need to cut some more highs. there are a few cymbals after the first drop that are piercing my ears.
nice pace.
cool melodies.
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14-01-2005 20:09 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by stickbubbly
the intro has a nice feel to it. I like the drum rolls
i think you need to cut some more highs. there are a few cymbals after the first drop that are piercing my ears.
nice pace.
cool melodies.
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still in the making...cheers!
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14-01-2005 20:23 |
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masheen
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nice synth sounds at the start, would sound better if you had that other synth just b4 the drop comming in earlier.
beats sound all over the place when it drops! need some more beats with them and turn down the snares in between the 2 main snares.
but liking the style!
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14-01-2005 21:05 |
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camo
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real nice tune!i like the wobbling bassline(1.46 - 2..04)!!!!!!!!
its great. your breaks are also awesome. i heard alot of ya tunes. they are all good!!
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15-01-2005 02:30 |
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Surora23
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thanks...the final will be sweet...i got a lot of work to do to it..but its in good progress right now..
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15-01-2005 03:15 |
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peet
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intro. ok i don't like those strings. rest is good. drumbreaks are well done. nicely compressed.
everything else is good but i don't like the drum edits around 02:10. lose them man they are annoying. oh wait thats your ghost snare. yeh man put a lot less velocity on that ghostsnare it's WAY too loud. the reece bassline can be also a lot more processed (read distorted).
still good.
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15-01-2005 14:25 |
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XTensionTrigger
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I will wait for final...
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15-01-2005 14:46 |
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Nosrac
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Hey nice to see Peet got over his bout of Tourett's and is out there reviewing again - I guess he just needed a "gentle" reminder.
The song is tight as usual. The big sweeping sound is key and the synth hits are also very nice. Nice punchy bass and snare. Variations at the end of every other bar a bit typical. Try adding a bass drum or two to the tom rolls. Also, they sound a bit too quantized, try fiddling with the velocity in the key editor to make them sound more like a real drum roll (see Alien chapter). When the drop hits those additional hi pitch sounds are amazing. Drums could roll a bit more nicely here though. Vocal sample sounds nice, but a bit typical x-files. Overall a very big sounding tune with lots of good sounds (this isn't the track you used one of my samples is it?) I'll rate the finished version. Keep up the good work - you've single handedly got me respecting techno based dnb - nice work!
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15-01-2005 18:07 |
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Samoth
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Good beats after 1:50, nice and breakbeat. Sounding good so far. The little drum rolls are a nice touch.
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