d3fcon - WHeN MaN HaTeS HiMsELf |
d3fcon
Producer

Registration Date: 29-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'WHeN MaN HaTeS HiMsELf' and post your comments here!!!
BUMBACLOT
Here come a new track, under construction, i'm waiting for your comments , wish they will help me
ENJOY, life is an egg
__ ----- HuMbLe BeAtS -----
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13-01-2005 22:30 |
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tetsuo
Guiness factory
  
Registration Date: 26-12-2004
Posts: 678
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Hum... a bit of hardcore hein?
Nice drum set, should variate a bit more over the track, sound really compressed tho... And there are too present, should have more sound inthere but the basses sound pretty good. braek core i would say.....
( t'aurais pu mettre 1 sample en anglais.....)
__ Yesterday' s futur is today!!
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14-01-2005 14:10 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm

Registration Date: 22-12-2004
Posts: 6,160
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nice song, need's something else in it to keep attention near the last 2 or 3 minutes...
the hihats in the drums could do with a slight high shelf boost, there's nothing in the high end so it would help compensate.
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14-01-2005 16:24 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
 
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
Posts: 377
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the drums have no highs. sounds like your holding them under a blanket. they are nice and tight though. melody is interenting. sounds like a nintendo game.(thats not always a bad thing).
cheers!
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14-01-2005 20:24 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
  

Registration Date: 15-12-2004
Posts: 599
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Is there a frequency gate or something on this track cause all the highs are gone - except in the sample. The little drum variation at 0:18 is fantastic - this could be the basis of a whole tune or at least come in at the end of every 4 bars in this one. Ya it comes back at 3:44. Nice classic style here and a nice roll leading up to the drop (could filter this) and the new synth there sounds good. A well structured tune, but hard to say anything else until the sound is fixed, opened up and beefed up in general - try adding some distortion or overdrive to the drums as well.
__ Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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15-01-2005 17:50 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro isn't very exiting
Drums: sound a bit dry, try spicing them up.
Vocal is quite nice. Is that Dominique Pinon's voice?
Drop: bassline melody is ok, sound is a bit simple though. The bassline gets dropped quite fast too.
Bassline comes back in with new melody. Good again, the switching with the other sound is quite good too
This track is way too simple though, with too little elements. So add some stuff, give it more depth
Overall sound is quite lowfi though, I guess this is due to the the drums sounding a bit lowfi
1.75/5 for the track
1.75/5 for the sound
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004

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21-01-2005 14:34 |
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