BigFire 
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Registration Date: 09-01-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Solar Winds' and post your comments here!!!
Just wrote this about a Month ago. Was experimenting with some tbee ish basslines.
Tell me what you think more to come soon.
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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11-01-2005 20:25 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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liek the intro but the pad sounds a bit disharmonic...drums sound a little thin...you filter in some drums...could sound a little cleaner but was cool...you could make the sub bass more noticable...ok sub comes forth....i like idea of the track but it doesnt really go anywhere...
2.5 track
2.5 levels programming
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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11-01-2005 20:41 |
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spudleyq
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Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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Intro is laid back.......that hi-hat sounds like it should be doubled up in the beginning instead of just after that synth sweeper comes in. There should be a break before you bring in those tramens, or just filter them about and chop them up so they aren't constant. The idea is pretty good, keep it up!!
2/5
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11-01-2005 21:01 |
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DJParash
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you can lower the level of your bells alittle to high I think. The drums can be alittle clearer aswell. the sound very dull. I do like your bass line and the voice samples. But where does this track go it just seems to repeat itself. get kinda boring. Change up the drums every so often. change the bass line abit chop it up some. needs more variation. just work at it more and you will have something here.
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Parash AKA Kleric
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11-01-2005 21:46 |
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tetsuo
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Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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Nice sub base, variation in it are there, add some volume to it...
I don't like the bell sound, but that's my opinion. The filtered sound of the background bring the dark side and it doesn't suit the bell, so change the bell or put some lfo or effect to it to make it more agresive.
Drums are nice, not so loud though. If you're still working on it, want to hear the changes...
peace
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11-01-2005 22:07 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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it's cool. 
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11-01-2005 22:11 |
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fogboy
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nice flowing intro like the sample don't like that defender sort of sound that much cool tune tho
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13-01-2005 22:44 |
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Nosrac
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Intro synth is heavenly - nice juxtaposition with the deadly sound that comes in. however, that sound is a bit too dry - some reverb please. Nice beat underneath and a splendid filter in of the amen. Great new sound at the drop. Perhaps give that raspy dry sound even more reverb here. Nice combo of your own drums and the amen, but perhaps a bit too panned and sound totally seperate. Love the filtering in and out of that amen! What are you using for this. When the amens drop out, it's a completely different tune -very slick - let that go for a while. This track is all about contrast, which is cool, but let each side of the coin get its time. What said in the sample is not totally correct (a movie sample?) but that's just me being picky since I teach physics. Overall a very nice track - VERY dark, I'll be tuning in for more. 3.5/5 for now, certainly more if these minor problems are fixed.
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MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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15-01-2005 17:58 |
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thefunke1
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I quite enjoyed the song overall, the intro synth has a great sound, although the sub sound seems a little too distorted for my taste. Very dark and dreamy sound. I enjoy the drums coming in at 1:20, although it would sound nicer to have more of a drum roll, with the punch at 1:23, at the moment it sounds like the volume is being automated very quickly, and doesn't achieve the punch I would expect. I enjoy the drum change up at 1:55 - 1:57. The bass line that starts at 2:20 is great, although needs to be less of a sub base sound. Very nice clean sound between 3:16 - 3:21, I really enjoyed that 5 second melody.
Overall more of a song I would chill out too, rather than get up and jump around. Nice work.
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19-01-2005 04:22 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Bell sounds are really nice
The resonated distorted sweeping thing isn't that good though.
Drums are quite nice it seems
Ah, drop. Amen is quite good, but needs a bit more hi-end and a little boost.
The bassline needs more bass.
Overall the sound is quite muddy.
The bells get a bit annoying after a while.
About the structure: try making it more intresting, with more tention and release
1.75/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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20-01-2005 14:31 |
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xevex
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Registration Date: 06-08-2007
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nice track. all sounds pretty good to me.
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