 miki - Axe is not only for killing  |
miki 
Producer
Registration Date: 10-06-2004
Posts: 63
 |
|
Please check out my new track 'Axe is not only for killing' and post your comments here!!!
I'm sorry, I wasn't here such a long time but in the near future I'll change it ...
And here is my song ... the title is inspired by my sister's drawing(see her at the avatar).
I put in this quite effort, so what do you think ... ?
__
MiKi
|
|
|
10-01-2005 23:42 |
|
|
wreakon
evol genius
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
Posts: 437
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
nice intro.. tight beats
good base and levels
structure seems weird
nice sounds... sounds kinda analogue... although they get a bit repetitive and annoying (not that my tracks dont)
missing something... might be fixed by adding some atmos and fixing the structure
good track though
__
{{{d-_-b}}}
The Patch lab - Download free vst patches, banks and kits
mylamespace
|
|
|
11-01-2005 00:35 |
|
|
Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
Posts: 599
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
Nice hard bass drum and bass coordination when it hits at the start - really like that bass sound used as single hits with the sweeps. Nice meaty roll to it at 1:20-1:43. However, I do not like the bass sound that comes in at 1:43 - still a solid beat, but this sound is hardly worth the attention given too it in my opinion - just rubs me the wrong way - a bit too FMish. You've got very good sound quality here I hope you go back and work this "track" into a song that that intro deserves. Perhaps use that splendid bit between 1:20-1:43 as your core or at least bring it back a few times.
__
Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
|
|
|
11-01-2005 01:06 |
|
|
Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
Posts: 6,160
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
yea, i like that begining.
*GETS FUNKY!*
let's hope it gets better.
albino2 for bass?
i liked the FMish thing.
you make me want to go make music.....
__
|
|
|
11-01-2005 02:35 |
|
|
DJParash
Producer
Registration Date: 04-12-2004
Posts: 46
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
I like your drums. they are nice and clean and crisp. The intro is good. the tune does get a little repettative and boring. I like how the bass line comes in at about 1:40. needs something else It lacks.
__
Parash AKA Kleric
|
|
|
11-01-2005 08:47 |
|
|
tetsuo
Guiness factory
Registration Date: 26-12-2004
Posts: 678
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
That's pretty good, you must like your sister a lot... 
the bass line got a cartoon vibe, really nice, would see a bear dancing on it or something like that.
I thinks it's really good, a bit too looped in my point of view but keep at it, not finished yet
__
Yesterday' s futur is today!! 
|
|
|
11-01-2005 12:13 |
|
|
dj2lip
Producer
Registration Date: 31-12-2004
Posts: 13
|
|
nice intro,
very tight bassdrum, which i like very much.
also the switch in style around 1:45 is cool, although the bassline for my taste goes to far in the direction of rave at 2:37. but hey, that's only my humble opinion.
in general, this is one of the better tracks I heard so far on this site.
keep up the good work! 
|
|
|
11-01-2005 16:32 |
|
|
Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
Posts: 2,127
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
i really like this intro so far...the drums are phat...some cool sound effects....when you make the first drop, make it more dramattic...ad maybe some amens or something, and a driving hi-hat or soemthing...maybe change the bass sample when you have that lil bass solo...i htink it could be nastier...distortion could do that...add some kind of effect on it tooo...second breakdown...i dont like the notes you played...they could of went a little deeper...drop an octave...again that reece could be a different sample...i dont think you have enough percussin variations...
3/track
2.5/levels and programming
__
Rinse it OUT!!!! 
|
|
|
11-01-2005 20:09 |
|
|
Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
Posts: 11,238
Helpfulness rating:
|
|
Nice drums. Kick seems a bit deep though, might conflicht with basslines.
Melodies are out of key.
Some kind of drop: why did you change the drums? The previous ones were better!
Some kind of reece coming in, but it sounds way to digital. Spice it up with some distortion or grain or something.
The drums are quite allright, but the sounds and melodies aren't good, neither is the structure. There's no buildup and release anywhere
1/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
__
"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
|
|
|
20-01-2005 14:22 |
|
|
|
