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DJParash DJParash is a male

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Please check out my new track 'Prosium' and post your comments here!!!

This is a track that Rossi and I made together in december. he wanted to put a water mark on it so sorry for that hope youlike. please review it please and this is not the final version either. just the version that i had taken from the studio.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by DJParash: 10-01-2005 00:53.

09-01-2005 23:49

marine289 marine289 is a male

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Volume is really low. (or the previous track was really loud, and I turned the volume down).
First of all: please encode at a higher bitrate (at least 12 Cool

. 64 kbps is really low!
Intro: cool flute (or whatever it is Tongue

) nice melody.
Drums kicking in: really low volume, except the snare. The hi-hats are really hard to hear, and the ghosts could be a little louder.
1:20 vocals (copyright thingy??? a bit weird...)
Bass coming in: really nice bassline, I love it.
Besides the fact that your drums need a boost, they are also pretty repetitive, especially when you hear the snare louder then everything else (2-step snare is boring).
Scratching is really well-done! (around 2:40) I like it Bigup

4:16 Wow, coincidence does exist!!! At the fade-out of the drums, when the break started I was thinking: it would be so cool if a fat amen-break would kick in after the break (break was nice btw Smile

) ) And yes, an amen appears at 4:16, unbelievable Big Grin

Some nice variations on the amen, but in my imagination it sounded better. Well, must be the low sound quality Wink

hehe
Outro is nice too.
You know, this could be such a killer track, but Im not going to rate this (yet) because of the watermark Confused

(the irritating vocal, remove that!!) and the low sound-quality.
Lenght was good for a DnB track.
Please please please repost this at a higher bitrate!!
Im begging you! (i dont do that so often, so.. Tongue

)

10-01-2005 00:20

DJParash DJParash is a male

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Ill see what I can do to post it up with out the water mark but the person who I colaberated with wanted it on there. sorry for the low bit rate we did it threw acid as the mp3 converter ill get a better on hopefully.

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Parash AKA Kleric

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10-01-2005 00:49

wreakon wreakon is a male

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nice intro.. a bit quite though...nice beats and subtle bass also

yeah that watermark is ghay

first drop was a bit weak

generally the track is too quite

i really like the feel and the ambience

lacks a bass line... some low rumbling but thats it

nice cruzie tune Bigup

3/5

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10-01-2005 04:44

Nosrac Nosrac is a male

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Ya - intro is too quiet. Nice earthy sounding drums - did you program those? They sit very nicely in the mix - you could bring the sounds way up and they wouldn't interfere. Great dark notes being played at 1:35 - maybe some slight overlapping of notes. Sub is deep but could have more punch instead of just rumbling along. Scratching was quality and didn't stand out too much (remember hype, ugh!) Like the vocal sample - not the watermark though. When the amen comes in at 4:15 it doesn't go well with the snare of the other beat. Put reverb on one or the other at this point or just stop using the intro snare. Unique cutting of the amen however. The sound quality is a bit light overall but some good dark evil amen shit here - this should definitely be reworked -it also sounds like you've used a crappy MP3 converter. Even though that beat comes back in at 5:55 and continues till the end - it is very catchy and can seem to go on and on without getting annoying.

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11-01-2005 00:37

Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male

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i gotta fucking headach, so i am happy, glad, and joyus that it was quiet.

the lack of bitrate didn't matter much. it sounded good with good structure. the drums hwere just too damn loud in comparasion. when you faded them at 3:25, they where perfect.

that amen break at 4:16 never flowed well. it felt constipated.

oh and that fucking watermark. if i were to rip off a song.... this would not have been it.

besides, if somebody rips off yoursong. you can prove you made it with all the files, and then you sue them for money, they did all the hard work of making it and you get all the money for it. see.... getting ripped off is a good thing!

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11-01-2005 02:29

DJParash DJParash is a male

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Haha Yeah I didnt want that on there but Rossi did. Sorry for it Most of the drum work is programed other than the fillers at the begining and the amens the we cut up.

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11-01-2005 08:27

tetsuo tetsuo is a male

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for sure, volume is low, but u know it now.
I like the built up, bground bass is cool, dark the all thing up!!!
the voice at 4.13 sound a bit empty, maybe add some effect on it. The sub that come here and there is awesome, maybe i'll change the bitrate to hear it better; nothing to say bout drum, just one of the snare is too lound. Watermark things bring an alien sound which doesn't suit the bass.... too light
nice tune

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11-01-2005 11:42

dj2lip dj2lip is a male

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cool stuff m8,

i especially like everything that comes after the amen break at 4:13. did you record the scratching yourself? if so, RESPECT!
the entire track could use some more sub bass, but maybe this got caught up in the low bitrate.

great work!!! Bigup

11-01-2005 16:53

DJParash DJParash is a male

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When I play it in my car It has to much sub bass so We actually brought it down abit. I think it is because of the low bit rate and im sorry for it. Thank you everyone on your comments. we have been working on the track to improve it. hopefully when it is 100 % complete I can put it up on here for you. Its just a chore bringing things from his studio to my house you know what I mean.

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Parash AKA Kleric

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11-01-2005 21:31

DJParash DJParash is a male

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well We are almost complete on this track just need to do some minor things to this and then hopefully I can repost it p for you to hear the new version.

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Parash AKA Kleric

17-01-2005 06:08

Surya

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Awtch, 64kbps Frown

Hard to judge on the sound that way!

Volume is really low, next time normalize and limit your mixdown please

Quite dark, which is nice.

The fadeout followed by the fade in isn't very imaginative, now is it? Try making this transition more intresting.
Quite nice bassline coming in anyway

Drop: quite nice. Bass has enough sub, but not enough bass. Drums are quite nice too. But the snares are a bit loud maybe. Try boosting the ghosts a bit too.

Ah, nice touch bringing in the amen. But it's a bit too loud.

Not bad, but it could be more intresting. Try building in more tention. Some extra sounds and pads would be welcome too.

2.5/5 for the track

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20-01-2005 12:16

DJParash DJParash is a male

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Well We put this one on the shelf for right now, just hit a wall and cant think of what to do with it, However we sre almost done with another and once we can upload again ill post it

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24-04-2005 02:40

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