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janverstichel 
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Please check out my new track 'Nothing seems real' and post your comments here!!!
tried to put some electro stuff into the track
did some practise on the beats to
made with fl
made in one night
enjoy
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09-01-2005 15:48 |
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kareem
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nice intro , nice atmosphere.
Good tunes , very danceable.
Beats are nice and rolling but I think the snare needs more power.
Nice vocals 
Build-ups are very well done , good tension is brought in the track.
Nice use of effects.
One of your best tracks I must say, altough I think it lacks bass.
4/5
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09-01-2005 18:36 |
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tetsuo
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cool man
This tune really got a trancy way, not my style but the overall is pretty good: sound are clear, no clips, good construction, and the sound do respond to each other, good... but hate the baby voice, maybe with some phaser....
The drum part is not so present, few variation onto it but i recommend you to use more than one sequence, add extra vibe, i think.
good work 
tune: 2.5/5
overall:3.5/5
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09-01-2005 21:53 |
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janverstichel
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thx
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09-01-2005 22:12 |
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Nosrac
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Not trance - this is pure 80's electro - very nice crossover! Very crisp sounds and vocal sample. No complaints at all until the drum roll at 1:42 - try lowering the velocity on every other snare - emmulating what a real drummer does in a drum roll. This isn't as noticeable in the second drop because of the additional sound - but I think you could come up with a better build up to the drop. The snare sound is perfect. The end is a bit repetitive. Otherwise a very solid track. 
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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09-01-2005 22:39 |
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BigFire
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Call up Mr John B!!!! Electro funk.
Good Structure. but lacks bass.
The sounds you used could be a bit more polished if you know what i mean. Drums need to be Premasted before placing them.
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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09-01-2005 23:18 |
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marine289
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Intro is good, but the pad (i guess it's a sample) are crossfading (is that what you call it 
), at 0:16 and it really sounds awefull, because the 2 notes dont match.
Drums are good, I can hear you did some practice 
(maybe sometimes a little more variation).
Only thing: I hate the snare, it sounds so '80-ies like... I dont like the sound, but hey it's personal i guess.
Nice buildup, but I expected a little more at the drop, but I know how hard it is to do that, so good job anyway.
Second drop is better, more tension is built up, and the vocal is cool
(you got that from the 2 euro sample cd, right?)
Really cool leads!
The track is a bit repetitive at the end.
Outro is a bit weird, I expected the leads and the drums again, but that was it!
Well not really my style, but it's pretty good, i think this is one of your best ones yet.
3/5
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10-01-2005 00:03 |
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Halph-Price
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Casio snare, that's so awsome!!!
you were going for the total digital sound wern't you? it would follow the nothing seems real message.
did you make the break yourself?
the bassline doesn't drop far enouch down, like normal dnb sounds, it's more like a trance/dance song, with a deeper kick then the bassline.
lol, the vocals in the second are funny.
good song, only thing i can suggest is to not fade out, juset mute it at the end of the suck cymbal, the reversed one. that would be a smarter ending.
it's good.
see he's dancing.
the crossfading(?!!?) doesn't amtter at all, once the songs going it's a nice detune. i never even noticed it nor cared.
I STILL DON'T!
i like the swing in them though.
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This post has been edited 3 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 10-01-2005 14:36.
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10-01-2005 14:34 |
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janverstichel
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thx for the comments
and i made the break by myself (halph-price)
thx again
cheers
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10-01-2005 17:19 |
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Surora23
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cool intro but the notes are off with that pad...i think the breaks could be a little beefier...maybe add some distortion or compressino...hi bleeps in the background are cool, but this kind of sounds like a speed up break beat track... agian the pads come in and the notes are off...i dont like the drum roll you added in the break...it doesnt sound right...maybe its the sample you used...second break down..again you use the pad, that sounds cool, but just isnt to my liking...nothing changes in here...you relaly dont have any new elements in the track...everything just kind of repeats itself and doesnt really get interesting...a child vocal? sounded really out of place although it was kind of funny...again everything just kind of repeats itself and didnt really hear anything that got my hea bobbing....
2/track
3/sounds
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10-01-2005 18:27 |
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dj2lip
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as the baby already says: this is a wicked tune.
but you don't need the baby's remark to get that impression - the voice does not fit the track at all.
needs a bit more bass.
overall, I really like the entire digital vibe surrounding this track!!!
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11-01-2005 17:06 |
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janverstichel
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thx for the comments
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12-01-2005 22:15 |
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Surya
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Intry, quite synthetic sound, I prefer more natural sounds. But I guess that is the electro influence?
Bassline that comes in, is sometimes out of key with the pad.
Drums: quite punchy, quite nice. Kick seems a bit deep.
Vocal is quite allright.
Gets a bit repetetive quite fast though. Too much the same stuff the whole time.
Overall I'm not too fond of your choice of sounds and the melodies aren't that intresting either.
1.75/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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20-01-2005 12:02 |
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