Surora23 - Poison Fruit (final mix)

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Surora23 - Poison Fruit (final mix)

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Surora23 Surora23 is a male

Agressive Melodic Disorder

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Please check out my new track 'Poison Fruit (final mix)' and post your comments here!!!

After reading the reviews and the good feedback, i decided to go back and polish this up...there may be some surprising new pieces in here...Enjoy...THIS ONE IS KILLER!

This track has been deleted on the producer's request

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08-01-2005 23:34

alexander alexander is a female

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beautifull !

09-01-2005 00:56

Surora23 Surora23 is a male

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glad you liked...who else likes the final?

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10-01-2005 18:59

BigFire BigFire is a male

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Ketchy tune. Have you heard the posin fruit by rascal and clone? hehe allmost sounds like their sound Smile

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Good sub bass, drums are too high need to cut some 15k-20k, Do you work with referance monitors?
I found it very hard to get my highs right on reagular speakers. Kool tune could be a bit more original.

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Where's the fucking bass??!!

11-01-2005 21:23

Surora23 Surora23 is a male

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Originally posted by BigFire
Ketchy tune. Have you heard the posin fruit by rascal and clone? hehe allmost sounds like their sound Smile

the track is called forbidden fruit and yes i have...this is where i got the idea of this track...there track is much longer and has a lot better meldies...no i dont work with reference monitors...i usually have a lot of percusiion in my tracks..need more low and mid on my kicks to balance it out... Tongue

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11-01-2005 22:23

tetsuo tetsuo is a male

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ouille.... Sweet sound and melodies ( volume is a bit but = detail ) the sub is well placed and pumping, like the effect in the background, nice filter as well...The snare might sound a bit lound over the bass, don't know..;
The build up is good, the change is a bit noticeable with that new bass line, good... I really like the voices and the drop at 4.40, you should have push it that way a bit further instead of using back the first seq imho...
great tune man
level 3.5/5
tune 3.5/5

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by tetsuo: 11-01-2005 22:52.

11-01-2005 22:52

T.roll T.roll is a male

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Registration Date: 23-06-2004
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Very nice tune.
Track:
Like tech-house synth in intro. FX sample at that came up first at 1:03 is maybe a bit loud. Voice sample is kinda overused. Wow wierd punchy subs! Lead bass melody could be a bit more more original. Nice lead bass filtering. Breaks are really nice - you got rid of that problem with thin snares etc- respect! Don't really like bass cuts at 3:33.
Mastering:
hi freqs are overboosted imo. You could try to lower them and boost loudness of the whole track.
I can recommend you to use loudnes maximizer - it equals your peaks and brings the whole track to maximized gain you choose. (I use Steinberg Mastering Edition DXi pugin)
Rate: 4/5 track
2.90/5 mastering

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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by T.roll: 16-01-2005 11:41.

16-01-2005 09:13

Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male

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hey that maxamizer suggestion is a good one. the high end is a bit loud overall.

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17-01-2005 02:48

djhope-x
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Registration Date: 06-09-2004
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This track is like trance
with some tech-house sounds.
Nice Big Grin

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by djhope-x: 18-01-2005 10:16.

18-01-2005 10:14

Surya

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Intro is nice, quite trancey, but not too.

Drums kicking in: too distant (boost them), hats too loud and the whole track is obviously overcompressed. This becomes very aparent when the sub kick in: volume drops a lot again! Never compress your final mix, limit it!

The melody with the resonated distorted sound is quite nice, but I don't really like the sound itself.

Quite nice track, typical Surora bizznizz, but the sound isn't good. Levels are fooked and compression is horrible

2.25/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the levels and stuff

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19-01-2005 14:51

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