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marisol
Steppa
Registration Date: 23-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Creep' and post your comments here!!!
rough draft spent 3 hours on it so dont expect to much.
This track has been deleted. Reason: Old tracks removed
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08-01-2005 21:15 |
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Halph-Price 
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
Posts: 6,160
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dark
only 30 seconds into it i loved it. mmmmm.
maybe a sub for the drop, to help it have that full freq sound?
the rides sound so alone at times..... i dunno. i wouldn't mention it if it didn't stick out.
the second drop was weak, just the same thing. coulda done something there. maybe strings before it? dramatise it a bit.
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08-01-2005 22:44 |
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kaliyuga
Producer
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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nice intro like the vibe it gives kickin is quite old school bass riddem could of changed. kick in also bit to much of a switch for me.
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08-01-2005 22:44 |
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tetsuo
Guiness factory
Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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intro is nice and light, maybe add somevoices or effect (?). I really like the bass, well distorted and sound sick to me, just my style. The drum are ok but not so much variation, hit hat may sound too "long" in lenght... I think you need to complete this tune by adding more sound and rhytmic but the schedule is great, sound pro man...
tune:3/5
level:4/5
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09-01-2005 22:27 |
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BigFire
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 09-01-2005
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Great intro feel, Definitly something i could see illskillz spinning. But the bass in the beginning sounds like you reverbed the whole sound. if you play this tune on big 20 inch speakers that noise might blow them.
Just need a little bass cut, i allways pains me to do so 
. Whenthe song drops bass sounds good and full agian perhaps a little too full. Remeber to think inside the box. Over all sample quality sounds nice. and song structure is good. Great for a 3 hour session.
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Where's the fucking bass??!!
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09-01-2005 23:32 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Good basis, bassline is nice n dark
Drums need a boost though, and could use a bit more power.
Nothing more to add...
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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19-01-2005 14:44 |
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Room 24
Tourist
Registration Date: 01-02-2005
Posts: 19
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Nice intro but it takes up to much time.
bass line is nice and has nice variation but the sound is a bit weak and to loud in the mix .
The drums are a bit weak to maybe a bit distortion over the drumtrack.
I like the soundscape parts a lot
If it took only 3 hours I'm verry impressed .
Rating 3/5
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02-02-2005 15:06 |
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ethex
Player
Registration Date: 02-02-2005
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uuh! nice drums!
the bassline is super but its too loud i guess..
or maby you should but more volume on drums..
nice track! like it!
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02-02-2005 15:36 |
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