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tetsuo
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Registration Date: 26-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'mouai' and post your comments here!!!
maybe a bit longer this time...
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
__ Yesterday' s futur is today!!
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07-01-2005 10:20 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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I didnt hear your other track (yet) so I cant compare this with the other one.
First of all: try to convert to a higher bitrate. at least 128 kbps. This 64 kbps really sucks.
About the track: Intro is okay. Bass is getting a bit boring after a while. Drums are good, but the hihats sound awful. But that's because of the 64 kbps.
Some nice effects.
There's not really much to say about it. 2 minutes is pretty short too I guess.
1.75/5
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07-01-2005 12:30 |
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dj2lip
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Registration Date: 31-12-2004
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i like it pretty much, but i think you should elaborate on this one and fit in more variety with regards to the sub bass. as marine already said: 2 minutes is not long enough to give a decent statement.
cannot go more into detail, because I am just starting out myself.
2 / 5
cheers 2lip
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07-01-2005 13:53 |
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Halph-Price
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Originally posted by marine289
I didnt hear your other track (yet) so I cant compare this with the other one.
First of all: try to convert to a higher bitrate. at least 128 kbps. This 64 kbps really sucks.
About the track: Intro is okay. Bass is getting a bit boring after a while. Drums are good, but the hihats sound awful. But that's because of the 64 kbps.
Some nice effects.
There's not really much to say about it. 2 minutes is pretty short too I guess.
1.75/5 |
longer than his last...
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07-01-2005 14:49 |
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tetsuo
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07-01-2005 14:59 |
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Nosrac
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Similar start to filtered drop, but the sound insn't nearly as unique. However, the meat in this tune is far better - rolls quite nicely. The big bass swells are nice but could use just a slight tidying up - i'm not sure exactly how though. The sounds that come in at 1:23 are evil and freaky - nice - like those monkey birds from the wizard of oz. The reverby bass variation right before this one cuts out sounds good. Looking forward to hearing a finished version of this one. 3/5 for now.
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11-01-2005 00:07 |
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tetsuo
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13-01-2005 09:44 |
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miki
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so the sound quality sucks, i guess it's because it's 64 kbps, never mind ...
drums are great, hmm sound effects are superb, I like them a lot. I see the idea of the song but it's too short ...
2/5 **
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13-01-2005 14:29 |
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Airfull

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owkej
not bad...
some work to do...
but intro is nice, maybe u should build it up a bit longer
drums, sneechy (dunno what is means, but it feels like they fit with it)
ur end, is like no end...make it has an ending..not just stop!
bass...they have emotions, but not enough!
greetz
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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18-01-2005 10:42 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro... not very intresting
Once the drums come in, you drop it quite fast, so it doesn't feel like it's part of the track.
Basslines are quite nice.
Drums: quite allright, but hard to judge due to the bad quality of the mp3.
Quite good basis for a track, but you'll have to work on it a lot more to make it a real good track.
1.75/5 for the track
Sound is too bad to judge.
__ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
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19-01-2005 14:27 |
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Friscko
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Registration Date: 12-03-2005
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Intro: a bit empty maybe? I'd put in some hats..
Incomin drums: They come in very suddenly. You could try to use a flanger on your drums and let it come in like that.
drums: Nice. Rollin beats with, as far as i can hear them good hats.
bass: Ok, lil bit more distortion couldn't do any harm, i think
Overall: Could use a bit more variation
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