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tetsuo tetsuo is a male
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Please check out my new track 'mouai' and post your comments here!!!

maybe a bit longer this time...


This track has been deleted on the producer's request

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07-01-2005 10:20
marine289 marine289 is a male
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I didnt hear your other track (yet) so I cant compare this with the other one.
First of all: try to convert to a higher bitrate. at least 128 kbps. This 64 kbps really sucks.

About the track: Intro is okay. Bass is getting a bit boring after a while. Drums are good, but the hihats sound awful. But that's because of the 64 kbps.
Some nice effects.
There's not really much to say about it. 2 minutes is pretty short too I guess.

1.75/5
07-01-2005 12:30
dj2lip dj2lip is a male
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i like it pretty much, but i think you should elaborate on this one and fit in more variety with regards to the sub bass. as marine already said: 2 minutes is not long enough to give a decent statement.
cannot go more into detail, because I am just starting out myself.

2 / 5

cheers 2lip
07-01-2005 13:53 Homepage of dj2lip
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by marine289
I didnt hear your other track (yet) so I cant compare this with the other one.
First of all: try to convert to a higher bitrate. at least 128 kbps. This 64 kbps really sucks.

About the track: Intro is okay. Bass is getting a bit boring after a while. Drums are good, but the hihats sound awful. But that's because of the 64 kbps.
Some nice effects.
There's not really much to say about it. 2 minutes is pretty short too I guess.

1.75/5

longer than his last... Smile

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07-01-2005 14:49 Homepage of Halph-Price
tetsuo tetsuo is a male
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Ok, What happen was that i tried to upload that track once but it only took out 12s of it so that's about the previous track thing. I didn't try really to make a tune out of this but i was only "testing" the quality of reason' output...The first bass line do get annoying at some point, try to work on that but it's pretty the hardest to do since i get some sound right... Smile I fucked the bitrate thing as i was playing with sound forge and i haven't noticed that was coming out on 64hz, i'll be carrefull next time..
Thanx for the answer, i won't upload a128hz version of this trak for now as i'm working on a new one, will be longer this time Bigup

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07-01-2005 14:59
Nosrac Nosrac is a male
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Similar start to filtered drop, but the sound insn't nearly as unique. However, the meat in this tune is far better - rolls quite nicely. The big bass swells are nice but could use just a slight tidying up - i'm not sure exactly how though. The sounds that come in at 1:23 are evil and freaky - nice - like those monkey birds from the wizard of oz. The reverby bass variation right before this one cuts out sounds good. Looking forward to hearing a finished version of this one. 3/5 for now.

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11-01-2005 00:07 Homepage of Nosrac
tetsuo tetsuo is a male
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quote:

longer than his last... Smile


thanx m8, helpssss a lot Big Grin

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13-01-2005 09:44
miki miki is a male
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so the sound quality sucks, i guess it's because it's 64 kbps, never mind ...
drums are great, hmm sound effects are superb, I like them a lot. I see the idea of the song but it's too short ...
2/5 **

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13-01-2005 14:29
Airfull Airfull is a female
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owkej

not bad...
some work to do...

but intro is nice, maybe u should build it up a bit longer

drums, sneechy (dunno what is means, but it feels like they fit with it)

ur end, is like no end...make it has an ending..not just stop!

bass...they have emotions, but not enough!

greetz

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18-01-2005 10:42
Surya Surya is a male
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Intro... not very intresting
Once the drums come in, you drop it quite fast, so it doesn't feel like it's part of the track.

Basslines are quite nice.

Drums: quite allright, but hard to judge due to the bad quality of the mp3.

Quite good basis for a track, but you'll have to work on it a lot more to make it a real good track.

1.75/5 for the track
Sound is too bad to judge.

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19-01-2005 14:27 Homepage of Surya
Friscko Friscko is a male
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Intro: a bit empty maybe? I'd put in some hats..
Incomin drums: They come in very suddenly. You could try to use a flanger on your drums and let it come in like that.
drums: Nice. Rollin beats with, as far as i can hear them good hats.
bass: Ok, lil bit more distortion couldn't do any harm, i think
Overall: Could use a bit more variation

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