d3fcon 
Producer
Registration Date: 29-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Dumb and ass' and post your comments here!!!
Hi all, here come my first track on this site, hope you 'll enjoy, and i wish you to post some comments !
see ya
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05-01-2005 20:59 |
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zebediah
is deep in the jungle
Registration Date: 08-10-2004
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Craziness!!! Really like the voice samples goin on.
The beat is runnin but maybe a hi passed amen underneath it or something would heavy it up. The bassline is silly but very cool. Definitely has some jump up vibes. Would like 2 hear more from ya!
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Let the bass kick!!
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05-01-2005 21:43 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Is this your first (dnb) song, or just your first dnb song tou posted here?
Pads are nice, I like them, they give the track more body. But, when you dont play them, the track sounds a bit empty. Also they dont really fit with the other melody's and bassline. It's just a whole diffirent style, the pad and melody, I dont really think they match.
I think I recognize the beats, are they loops?
Dont really like the pitch changes in the snare. There is however a really nice variation in it (the down-pitched beat).
Dont really like the track besides the pads, although the trackname suits the track very much 
nah, just kidding 
There need to be more things added to your track, like more effects and background things to fill it up a bit more.
Also: I hate the sample played at 5:41. It's used so often! be original 
It's not bad, but I dont really like it.
1.75/5
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05-01-2005 21:48 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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kind of a square pusher feel only like funky and not scary as hell...kind of boring...its pretty minimal..the drums dont do much and the entire songjsut revolves around the bass...which i dont really like squares like that...just not my thing really..sounds could be louder too...something more upfront......that tramen that you use inthe bg...use that under your regular drum and chopit up for a nice drum pattern...thatll deffinitely make this more interesting...cheers for the effort..great for your first song on here...
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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05-01-2005 21:54 |
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d3fcon
Producer
Registration Date: 29-12-2004
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thanks a lot , i know my style is minimalist, i love clear beats and round bass, uncommon vibes and beats, sometimes funny; my favorite stuff = Photek, teebee
Year, this is my first track, in real this is the first track i finish entirely and am proud of it ...
panned snare is abused but my fault 
well, i'm finishing two tracks and soon u will be able to hear it. I will continue to notice all comments you will post, see ya guys, and girls
(Sorry for my english i'm french)
Music for fun, music for life
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06-01-2005 01:03 |
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peet
Steppa
Registration Date: 31-01-2004
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nice rhodes
it clips though
dont need the explosion
it ruins the vibe
you should start with a less powered break
save this one for the drop
dont like the lead (?) sound with that melody
make your intro longer it drops way too fast
i have to laugh at the drop
hehe
kinda clowny
it's cool
2/5
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06-01-2005 01:54 |
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d3fcon
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Lol erf thank ya
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07-01-2005 03:58 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is REALLY short. Try making it a bit longer.
Bassline is quite nice, cool melody
Drums sound really thin and empty though. And having the kick hard left and the snare hard right is NOT a good idea.
Starts getting a bit repetetive after 1.30.
Ah, breakdown. Good you didn't put it later.
Buildup is rather unintresting
Drop: hmmm, a bit too much the same again. The break was too short to just go on with almost the same thing.
Good you played a bit with the atmos and stuff, makes it less repetetive.
Overall: quite good sound, but panning those drums this way... And the track is based on a good idea but too repetetive.
2/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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