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Halph-Price 
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i like the sample, it's clever. talking about sampling in a way, as a form of flattery.
besides that the drop goes on a while without variation. during the 3.00 break it's pretty boring.
the drums are good, the rest rocks.
the second drops is amazing.
i guess if this is the track layout, it's great.
the sub at the end is lost for me, on these earbuds.
i assume there's a sub there.
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04-01-2005 22:24 |
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peet
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well the 'main' sounds aren't samples, it's all created myself. including the mains synth and the bleepy stuff. i was thinking the same about the breakdown needing more elements. youre right.
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05-01-2005 00:05 |
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d3fcon
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second track i listen, this one rocks, no way guy, but i prefere "bitch raw" .
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05-01-2005 02:56 |
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d3fcon
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Ha and guys, what does mean the sample in beginning, i don't understand im french 
, so please explain me ...
" ...sample is clever..."
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05-01-2005 02:58 |
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Halph-Price
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the people speaking in the beginning, that's a sample from a movie, and it is smart, brilliant, ironic, or witty, because, he "quoted" someone. which is not suppose to done, but the sample states why it should be done. to be listened to, it is very important, to quote. if you're never quoted, you never said anything, worth saying.
or as i did in my french class, use bable fish. let's see how well it works in real life. french class taught me something.
les personnes parlant dans le commencement, le that's un échantillon provenant d'un film, et lui sont futées, brillantes, ironiques, ou pleines d'esprit, parce que, il "quoted" ; quelqu'un. ce qui ne doit pas supposer fait, mais les états témoin pourquoi il devrait être fait. être écouté, il est très important, pour la citation. si you're ne citait jamais, vous n'avez jamais dit n'importe quoi, intéressant dire. ou comme j'ai fait dans ma classe française, poissons bable d'utilisation. let's voient qu'à quel point cela fonctionne dans la vraie vie. la classe française m'a enseigné quelque chose.
http://world.altavista.com/tr
and hey, there is a subbass going at the end, and it is faint. but i can hear it more now. okay's it's good for the end.
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 05-01-2005 05:37.
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05-01-2005 05:27 |
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zebediah
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Really like the intro. Doesn't sound complete 2 me though. I think just a sprinkle of some qwirky effects or somethin would add 2 the drama.
This really reminded me of that "What is a DJ if he can't scratch!" tune. Very fat! Maybe a little extra percussion over the beat would get things movin a bit more.
I like how you broke it down to just the sub + the beats a bit before the 2nd drop. Very Total Sciency. This song IMO has strong jump up vibes goin on. Sounds good meng!
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05-01-2005 09:11 |
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peet
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updated with a fresh mixdown
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07-01-2005 05:00 |
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Nosrac
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Très bon Halph Price - nice to see a fellow Canadien flexing his bilingual muscles!
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10-01-2005 23:45 |
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Nosrac
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Although the opening sample is clever, it goes on too long, with the typical hi hats is the background. Howver, when this one drops it has a very unique sound to it compared with your other tracks - earcatching for sure. The song rolls nicely to the second drop - nice build up. Love the envelope on this sound you made - even though nothing spectacular programmingwise happens as the track progresses, you could go on forever with that without getting sick of it - excellent sound
. The song structure sticks to the basics and could use a bit more melodic variation or ambient touches (ex. Cause 4 Concern future funk at about 3:00 in).
And Peet, all us lesser mortals would appriciate a review once and a while - you've got lots of good feedback on your tracks - time to spread it around where it counts - not just on the chat boards.
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11-01-2005 01:18 |
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peet
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im sorry nosrac ur so right ill get on it right away after i get myself some food cuz im starvin
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11-01-2005 18:03 |
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spudleyq
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so everyone likes that sample at the beginning eh? I don't like it.......wait......yeah I do. Rumble!!! The sub sounds kind of clipped.......but that might have been what you were going for. drop.....I'm not feeling this, this just isn't my style. Don't get me wrong.....it's good!! Just not something I would play out.....but then again that's just opinion. It sounds good though!
3.659283747657390289235693468723897/5
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11-01-2005 19:44 |
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kareem
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strange intro.
unexpected but nice build-up to the beat.
Nice sounds but there could be some more variation.
Nice build-up at 4min10.
Nice track but needs some variation
3/5
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13-01-2005 23:29 |
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Sensa
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I loveeeee this tune, absoulte dance floor smashin material.
quality work mate
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14-01-2005 16:44 |
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Nosrac
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Peet: said you'd be reviewing some tunes - a week later, and still nothing - I don't give a shit if their mine or what - but fuck, get on it dude.
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15-01-2005 00:17 |
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peet
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Originally posted by Nosrac
Peet: said you'd be reviewing some tunes - a week later, and still nothing - I don't give a shit if their mine or what - but fuck, get on it dude. |
i heard you the first time so just chill the f out dude, i'm on effing school from 7 in the morning to 7 at night so sorry if i don't get around to doing reviews in the 1 hour spare time i have left everyday.
geez.
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15-01-2005 00:29 |
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T.roll
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indeed needs more variations in drums, maybe some breakdowns or something.
intro - nice with this string and voice sample. Main part should youse more sub. Main lead coud use some more effects (filtering would be nice) etc.
A good base for a track but still needs working.
fo now 3/5
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15-01-2005 13:51 |
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Surya
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Intro is OK, cool vocal. Quite long though.
Drop: Nice drums, good bassline, but where's the bass and the sub? Boost those, the sub is virtually inauditable! Some more variations in the drums would be very welcome! Hats are a bit too loud.
Once the drums stop, the string becomes a lot louder. Did you boost it there, or is it just bad compression? Use a limiter to boost your volume, not a compressor.
A nice basis, but I have the feeling a lot more could have been done with this. It's essentially your nice drums, nice bassline and a string. A bit too basic imo. Give it more depth!
2.25/5 for the track
2/5 for the levels
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