janverstichel 
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'sweets' and post your comments here!!!
made with fruityloops
hope you like this
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02-01-2005 19:38 |
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f0re1gn
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Hah, nice start, though i was expecting the guitar/piano/whatever that is to have a melody 
Beats come in nicely, though that melody is getting pretty annoying i think.. :S
HMmmmm... The track didn't have any evolving idea, there was only the start, then the main part with a few drops and that's the whole song.. Didn't really like this track, though the mastering was pretty good.
I would suggest you to add a bit of variation to this track, and add a bit more variation to that piano melody too
Mastering was cool
GJ! 
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02-01-2005 19:49 |
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janverstichel
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thx for the comment
yeah, it's a short track with a few idea's of mine but i don't see it as a full track
cheers
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02-01-2005 20:34 |
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marine289
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A little bit disappointed. When i read that this was a sort of expirimental track, i thought you would expiriment a bit with drums and other stuff.
the background bells are quite nice, but that's just one thing. Some other okay stuff as well, but work it out as a song.
No offense, but I assume you are still using the same beats (I mean how it's made, not the samples you used). I always hear the same beats and stuff. Well it's not bad, but may be it's a good idea to do something completely diffirent, like non-2-step.
I am planning on making some breakbeats anyway, so if you want, I can send you the .flp's of them.
But it's always more fun when you discover things by yourself 
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02-01-2005 23:15 |
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DJParash
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Your drums are nice and crisp. Your melody is way to frequent, it needs to change up a bit maybe slice it up a bit. plus wheres the bass line?
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02-01-2005 23:58 |
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Halph-Price
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does fruity have a sound quality problem it seems tob e just dawning on me, using absynth2.
but anyways, the tracks a bit repative, but fuck that, that's music.
nothing really fat in this, very acuostic sounding though, which is a nice change.
since it's just an evloving beat there's nothing that comes out otehr then basicly one verse that slowly fades in. it's kinda fustrating, but it's a good practice song, try to apply whatever you got from this to a more devlopted song.
learn how much you can add to a part of a song to make it sound full, then use that to make a regular song evolve, using verses and chorus. you got the beats and everything down, and even a bit of the middle 8th.
good mixing goan on in there too. but nothing abrasive in it to make it stick out in my mind.
what is the composition of a dnb song?
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03-01-2005 00:01 |
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janverstichel
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the track i meant ,marine , is an other song
thx for the comments and marine it would be nice if i had some flp to learn out
cheers
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03-01-2005 00:15 |
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kareem
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Classy intro 
.Nice rolling beat falling in.
Bells are nice but they get boring after a while,godd variation on 1min04 though.Not very danceable, chill song.
Overall I think the track needs more variation.
Not you're best work.
3/5
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06-01-2005 15:32 |
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janverstichel
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thx for the commetnts
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07-01-2005 16:29 |
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Jeller
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U should put more variation in the whole song
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07-01-2005 17:38 |
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Surya
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Drums are quite nice, but could use a boost
Sub is nice n warm, good enough for an intro.
Melodies are nice, but I'm not too sure about all the sounds. The bells are nice though.
It's going on for almost 2 minutes now, and it's starting to get a bit repetetive, desperatly in need of some new elements (nice bassline or something?) coz it's a bit empty
2/5 for the track
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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