Surora23 
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Please check out my new track 'Poison Fruit' and post your comments here!!!
This is a track i just did in a few hours...nothing special but tis grimey but very dancy at tge same time...
It has a kind of a Rascal&Klone meets pendulum feel to it... Enjoy... (please rate thread)
Edit by Surya: New version here
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tetsuo
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Waowwww Sweat, really sweat start, do like the voice even if it not so present. The break and then the kik back at 1+ is very good, the sub just add some more strenght to the drum part, which is nice to me, good change in it.... Only 1 - to me: Or the track is too long, or just a bit repeatitive: For me, the best thing to do is to cut it a bit cause your sound are damn good...
peace to you, keep the thing up.
level:4/5
track:3.75/5
ps: if u still got in mind to make a trak with Glimmer, would love to hear it...
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tetsuo
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[quote]Originally posted by tetsuo308
Waowwww Sweat, really sweat start, do like the voice even if it not so present. The break and then the kik back at 1+ is very good, the sub just add some more strenght to the drum part, which is nice to me, good change in it.... Only 1 - to me: Or the track is too long, or just a bit repeatitive: For me, the best thing to do is to cut it a bit cause your sound are damn good...
peace to you, keep the thing up.
ps: if u still got in mind to make a trak with Glimmer, would love to hear it...[level:4/5
track:3.75/5]
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Halph-Price
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what's he posting twice for?
so anyways, 
the beats and set up are great, the background atmospheres there.
the drum loops are suppose to be reptative it's part of the style. don't forget that. you got them good still, you have a whole bassline covering them.
it's like a monet. it seems great fromt eh impression, but up close it's really just simple.
the pad stabs are good, great drums again. need a sample or something to make it significant standing out. even like one word.
the bassline, doesn't sound perfect. in it self it's perfect, it's probably the instruemnt, need's a bit more bottem tone, maybe. try to boost thoes bottem fq for the bass, a wee bit.
but other than that, don't repeat your transitions.
it's fucking perfect song.
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01-01-2005 20:15 |
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muphasta
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what's he posting twice for?
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for the exp.-points off course cheatin bugger 
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4 stars already this calls for a headphone session!
very good man. levels are nice. I think the first sub could be bit more present. basses are too loud or beats to silent at 2.10 . bit too distorted or stereo-ize otherwize. at about 4.00 it needs something extra.
just a tought but try if you have it the H20 compressor plug in on the basses.
the chime sounds bit more expressive and more. its kind of too full, distorted and chaos in some parts. needs more of surprising build then a down up down up construction. IMHO!!!!
3/5
cheers
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01-01-2005 20:27 |
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tetsuo
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sorry guys, not that i wanted tocheat just forgot to quote the song and just hit the quote knob and it just post the whole thing again...but i don't think it count me a double post anyway... moderator should know
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muphasta
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01-01-2005 22:05 |
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peet
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crash. intro. those trancey pads should be more processed, maybe even distorted, and lesseeeen on that reverb man! well you can keep some reverb in but when the song progresses get it out or change it into a distorted bass sound or something like that.
then it drops. yeh great great great subline. great. i wish you pulled some low of the kick so it doesn't make the bassline seem messy.
as i said you should really change that pad into a bass sound. like all distorted and fucky.
that new reece breakdown synth has shit to do there it doesn't fit. the first drop was GOOD ENOUGH man. that reece only messes it up. maybe use the trancey pad notes and use them for that reece?
it all sounds good but you have too many different elements that all colide. try to really listen and think if a melody or reece or synth works. and try to go more simple. cuz that first introdrop was rocking.
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02-01-2005 00:21 |
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Surora23
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Originally posted by peet
it all sounds good but you have too many different elements that all colide. try to really listen and think if a melody or reece or synth works. and try to go more simple. cuz that first introdrop was rocking. |
cool...glad you liked the majority of it and what not...but waht do you mean collide? to track is quite simple yeah? i really dont have that many elements in it...if counted them its under 20...i dont know if thats still alot...but everything is quite simple...the new version i have is a little shorter and has more melody variations and etc...
thansk for the input....any more takers?
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03-01-2005 18:32 |
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foundname
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by foundname: 26-02-2007 13:06.
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03-01-2005 18:42 |
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Surora23
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no i dontl...i was asking for an example...i dont know what in the track collides because tis so simple...iof i listed what is actually in the track youd be amazed how simple it is...in my fl studio main song window im only using a total of about 12 different patterns....i dont really know what in the song collides....
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03-01-2005 18:45 |
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XTensionTrigger
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Yep man, very cool arytmic synth's sequenc's, niece square bass's, everything is great integrity...
Nice track anyway...
I her cosmiogirl or red devil inside or something other ?
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03-01-2005 22:36 |
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Surora23
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tahts funny that you guys are hearing vocals...there are no vocals in this track..it was a sample i pitched up and sounds like a bird squawking or soemting...either wait its not a vocal guys lol
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03-01-2005 23:19 |
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d3fcon
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Yo
i like the atmos behind and synth lines. Anyway good harmony in levels, good track i like
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04-01-2005 02:04 |
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XTensionTrigger
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tahts funny that you guys are hearing vocals...there are no vocals in this track..it was a sample i pitched up and sounds like a bird squawking or soemting...either wait its not a vocal guys lol
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cosmogirl and red devil it's vst's not sample sounds...
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04-01-2005 13:28 |
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Surora23
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tahts funny that you guys are hearing vocals...there are no vocals in this track..it was a sample i pitched up and sounds like a bird squawking or soemting...either wait its not a vocal guys lol
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cosmogirl and red devil it's vst's not sample sounds...
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hahaha gotcha...lol now i feel like the dummy 
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04-01-2005 17:25 |
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Nosrac
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Great string sound to open - sample or synth? Overall very good sounds but a very standard beat, drop and structure. You should take your knack for great sounding tunes and try pushing the programming envelope a bit. Love the vocal sample and when the strings come back in at 2:50, with the little pause soon after - smooth. Very slick drum filtering. 3/5 for the tune 4/5 for sound.
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04-01-2005 23:19 |
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Surora23
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awesome...im really enjoying that youn guys like this one...im going to upload i final version sometimes either this week or next week!...any final suggestions? i think you guys will really like the new version...a lil less repetetive and has some new melodies in it and a vocal 
...keep em comin!
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05-01-2005 17:27 |
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Surya
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New version here
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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