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Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 20-05-2004
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It could really use some melody where the song is built around...
some nice ideas in it, but it don't flow as much as it should yet
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31-12-2004 10:06 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
Posts: 106
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Start is a bit too reverby imo.. the vocals should get louder and less reverby.. bass comes in very fast :o Your kick sounds like a bass, lolz. This track makes me nod my head though 
1:14, i think there's a bit too much resonance (if that's how you call it) in that bass.. I like your snare sound though 
Gets a bit too noisy 2:15-2:20, my speakers began pooping :x Beats fit the track very well, but imo they could use a bit variation.. 2:57 - very nice instrument for the track, fits the whole idea
What was that at 3:54?! A bass should have came in, together with the whole drop sounds, that were going through the third minute 
(imo)
What was that end, lolz.
Pretty neat track, but needs some workin', and this isn't quite the dNb i like 
I like hard stuff.. this isn't hard nuff for me, so..
Keep it up!! 
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31-12-2004 10:10 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is quite nice, nice soundscapes
Drums coming in: nice, but the kick is a bit wide. It goes from about 120hz all the way down to 60hz. Try keeping it around 80hz.
Some of he high frequencies in your scapes are hurting my ears, go easy on the +10khz!
Nice synths you have and stuff, but they are a bit loud. Drums get overpowered. They could use a bit more mid, now they're mostly hats going on.
Overall the bass is quite overpowering.
Very dark tune, not your tipical DnB but it's nice in it's own right. But the sound needs work.
2.5/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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12-01-2005 18:47 |
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thefunke1
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 09-12-2004
Posts: 151
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I enjoy the intro, and the synth used has a very interesting glassy sound to it, although as the intro builds up I was expecting a big drop in at about 0:50, but it doesn't come... the drums, although they have a nice flow lack punch.
At around 2:00 it's sort of the same thing, expecting something the doesn't come.
Overall it has a nice feeling, and does flow, with build ups created with the synth rather than the drums.
I would have to agree witht the post from Surya, the synth is over powers the drums a little too much, which causes them to be lost in the background.
Overall, what can you say, for all on here, it takes a lot of heart to put your creations up for criticism. Therefore, keep working away, mabey I would suggest re looking at the song, and adjusting the levels as suggested by Surya, and re-post it to see if what you have tweeked is correct, try to bring the drums forward into the song, give them more presence.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by thefunke1: 19-01-2005 01:58.
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19-01-2005 01:57 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
Posts: 6,160
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thefunke1 you must change that avatar it's creeping me the fuck out....
i am still listening to the song, and ya the high end hurts me ears, the song is good. holy fuck my ears hurt!
nice ending 
hell masn, when the song looped over after i thought i might of had my internet radio going instead of your song.... 
that's the best i can give you.
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