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Please check out my new track 'Headburn' and post your comments here!!!


okay here it is

please rate it bottom-left on the page

edit by thechronic:
I removed this track on Peet's request

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by peet: 31-12-2004 14:50.

31-12-2004 01:36 Homepage of peet
amperror amperror is a male
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delightfull intro...fatsome basss...wxd beat...strcktive structure...amino amenz...compromized mastering...
just xllent Afro
31-12-2004 09:00 Homepage of amperror
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The intro is nice, made me almost fell in love with the song already
but I really don't like the melody line you use after the drop
It could still use some variation, certainly the drums and the melody
bass sound is nice

I like the parts with the violins the most Smile
31-12-2004 10:17
charleskoncept charleskoncept is a male
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well the intro is nice like stated above.... i cant sya as i agree with using the kick in it though, i think the ahts alone would have bee sufficent. do you always have such long intros?

breathing that was a pretty cool effect...
i have to disagree i like the bounce of this track, the snare is too flat though.. i think you need something more to it. i heard an amen in there somewhere. where is it? thats all your using it for is some cheeesy filler inbetween.. now thats wrong..

peace...

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31-12-2004 16:47
camo camo is a male
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hi! I like ya track! but with some vocals i would like it more!
do ya thing! peace

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31-12-2004 19:03
XTensionTrigger XTensionTrigger is a male
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Cool pad in intro, oryginal bass in all track, great FX...
It pleases me in center track small bass like ping-pong Smile ...

Correct mastering, everything it sounds well, but integrity is a bit tame, anyway its great track...

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31-12-2004 23:11 Homepage of XTensionTrigger
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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oh man this intro is sexy...AHHHH nasty reece...and liquid hits...and then some dillinja feel.......oh man...im not fan of dillinja but i was feeling that.....

BAM!!!!!! drop is heavy as hell...dude..dude...wow...dude....its fucking new years...and this track has me jumpin....lovin it....

wow...everything is so good...i really enjoyed this...and listening over...

5/5track
5/5 levels

and kudos for some origniality... you have my vote for track of the month, as this one should be posted for december Bigup

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01-01-2005 00:58
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Nice strings and melody in the intro but the master compression is set too high I think (strings drop for a short while when the basskick comes in).
The first note the sub plays beginning at 0'34'' is not in key or not well equalized (because of the cut below 60Hz you did?) IMO.
I like the way the strings end and the lead begins, classic but good!
But then after the drop 1'14'' (nice drop btw) the melody changes completely and it makes me feel a bit like a second track. This melody is used too much IMO so I'd use the first melody a bit longer to undo the effect of a second track + to get some variation.
The filter around 3'30'' is nice <edit> but maybe a bit triggery if you get what I mean <\edit>! Bigup
The hihats are clean and make the whole actif, nice.
A basskick and bass overlap, a mean the basskick around 5'40'' that goes together with the subbass for example around 5'25''. Try to EQ so the kickattack gets more attention and the subbass is like an extension.

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02-01-2005 03:01
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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that's kinda cool, the kick makes the strings kinda, fad, that's a cool Bassili Brothers kinda thing eh? i like the way that sounds. the snare does sounds a bit flat. the amen breaks are cool, but maybe make there reberb/delay cut out sharp. it's a good song.
that bass at 3:30 sounded funky at first, you needed to make it come a live a bit after maybe. or just do something else. that was a good time to fluxs. the rest after that shit was tight. maybe add a flang to that snare. a slight phaz, would work.

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02-01-2005 23:38 Homepage of Halph-Price
Surya Surya is a male
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Nice strings in the intro. But you can hear them dropping with each kick: overcompression! Fix that mate!
Nice melody and nice stereo image.

Rougher bass coming in: sounds promising.

Drop: nice basslines that kinda miss bass.
Some phatter snare would be nice, and some ghosts too
I was wondering though: where's the kick? You can almost hear it. Almost Wink
From the volumechanges you can clearly tell again: overcompressed Wink

Very good drive in your basslines and melodies, but the drums lack a bit of power, and the mastering is dead awfull I'm afraid.

2.5/5 for the track
1.25/5 for the levels

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12-01-2005 18:55 Homepage of Surya
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