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f0re1gn 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Nice start, though strings get a bit too repetitive (fix that by making them more smooth 
) Beats and bass come in very nicely. Nice flute or whatever that is 
Likin' the melody. Lovin' the part from 2:00 to 2:55
Very good job. It's very repetitive, but i jsut can't notice that repetitivness 
Pretty melodic stuff, but the strings need to be more smooth imo.
End was coo.
Very nice track, but the strings don't go smoothly imo
that's why i'd change them if i were you 
Otherwise, 4/5, i liekd it! Love melodic stuff and stuff 
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30-12-2004 19:00 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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great intro...good for a solid mix but i think it gets a bit repetetive...change the melody maybe...break is cool...second drop is nice but again gets a little repetetive...i cant stay focused in the track..its good but just too long...the production sounds great though...nice drums and i love the bass...
3/5track
4/5 levels
If you shorten this and add some more melody variations itll be ncie!
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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31-12-2004 21:27 |
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DJParash
Producer
Registration Date: 04-12-2004
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Nice intro. Come down on your level on your pad abit and raise the flute abit. the melody should change abit at 1:30 has already gotten repettative. you have nice clean crisp drums, love them. my pet peev is when the drums arn't clean and you did a good job. change up the satre thing abit. i dont like the keys you used. otherwise this is a solid track with good production. just very your pad melody abit and you have something here. 3/5
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Parash AKA Kleric
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03-01-2005 00:09 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro strings are a bit cheesy and too repetetive
Drums are nice but are a bit overpowered by the strings.
Bass could use a boost too!
Intro takes a bit long too, strings really get boring.
Ah, at last the strings filter away 
Hmmm, ok, so it's that kind of track (writing this while the strings come back in)... Erm, dunno man. A bit too boring for me, really. Try adding some more stuff, coz the flute stuff and the armos aren't enough to keep thisone intresting.
2/5 for the track
2/5 for the levels
2.5/5 for the sound (levels are fucked, but sound is nice n clear)
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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