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wreakon 
evol genius
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Please check out my new track '9000Series - Full version' and post your comments here!!!
The is a new version of the first track i uploaded here
i tried to give the tune some atmosphere and a feel which the first track was lacking
hope you like :)
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29-12-2004 23:25 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
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nice one! snares in the intro could use some volume but the rest of your levels are nice. sick beat.
nothing more to say
cheers! 
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30-12-2004 02:45 |
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Halph-Price
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good vocal level, i tihnk, it makes more in atmosphere, and since it gets repedative, it's a good idea to have it more in the background.
but for a sci-fi song, you went more with acustic sounds then alarms, or techno bleeps. i found that a bit odd.
the atmosphere worked well at points, but it's gotta have more bleep/computer atmospheric noise, i think. i suggest some soundchip emulator, like a GameBoy, ATARI or that sort. delay or something.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 30-12-2004 03:51.
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30-12-2004 03:50 |
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f0re1gn
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Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Nice start, nice mastering throughout the whole track. Good job, on that. Sounds are all well managed too i think 
Nice end too.
Nfi, nothing bad to note
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.:f33l1ng th3 p0w3r 1s 3ss3nt1al:.
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30-12-2004 10:14 |
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d3fcon
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Registration Date: 29-12-2004
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yo
Good general level, skyzophrenic beats il'm fan, good job mista
bigup
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03-01-2005 16:42 |
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Emblem-X
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boooooom 
hahaha that sample! put me in the mood right away!
great athmo's, very nice! just my style
beats are sick man!
sound is very allright, good mixdown, nothing bothers me!
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03-01-2005 17:31 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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cool intro...i like that vocal...intro hella scary and dark...im liking this...drums fade...bass hit...grimey....nice drop... maybe that brak could be a little tighter...i like the shirt filtering...sounded good...track is getting a little repetetive...after that the track doesnt do much...decent structure and what not but i wasnt feeling the rest...nice one keep it up!
awesiome track over but it could use some work.,..
total 3/5 average for track and levels
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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07-01-2005 20:47 |
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wreakon
evol genius
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yeah your right Surora23... the second half is to similar to the first... i tried to mix up the bass a bit but its not really enough to keep it interesting
cheers
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08-01-2005 01:39 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Intro is ok, with the filtered drums.
Vocal seems a bit too loud though, till the other stuff comes in. Maybe reEQ it a bit to stick out a bit more in the mix.
Bassline is quite nice. Drums too, but the snare could a tad more punch. Maybe layer some nice hats on top too 
Gets a bit boring after a while though. I guess the bassline isn't intresting enough to build a whole track around.
So quite good basis, but sound needs a bit work, and it's too repetetive.
2/5 for the trak
2/5 for the sound
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