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*Izah*
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Registration Date: 02-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Primeval' and post your comments here!!!
Dunno if this is the full version or beta.. depends on the reviews :)
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29-12-2004 20:30 |
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DJParash 
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Registration Date: 04-12-2004
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I like your intro, the atmosphere is great. is your bass from absynth? the bassline is good. your drums are good in the intro but once it drops it seems as if they were dulled out. try compressing them. the amens are not clear at all they are all mids. your drums sound clear in the breaks but when every thing comes in they dont sound as crisp. try using different amen samles or clean them up. your bass line gets too repetative towards the middle, change it up. also try adding some strings to it might help out.
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Parash AKA Kleric
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29-12-2004 22:19 |
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f0re1gn
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Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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:o Nice start, but imo you should remove ths hats or whatever it was in the 0:01 part (the first sounds), ncie beat come-in
Nice bass intro.
Wow, after the drop, the beats that goes as the breaking beat (the second one), i so totally love that snare and kick, awesome. True, that melody gets a bit too repetitive. Imo the bass could use more bass, it's kinda filtered too hard, not that well hearable.
The end and other stuff was fine for me.
This track misses a bit of power and pump because of it's bass compression. The bass kinda fades to the background a bit, that's noticable, but slightly. I say, fix it, and you'll get great results!! 
Keep it app!! 
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.:f33l1ng th3 p0w3r 1s 3ss3nt1al:.
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29-12-2004 22:57 |
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*Izah*
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okay thanks.. i'm gonna work on that bass.. and try to compress the beats a bit.. so this is still a BETA version 
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30-12-2004 13:32 |
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Surya
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Intro is ok, but could be a bit more intresting.
Drums, especially the snare sounds a bit thin. Make it a bit phatter and punchyer.
Drop: quite good bassline, but give it a boost in the low end. Drums really sound too thin now. Make the snare smashyer. Switching is quite good, but lacks a bit impact due to the drums lacking power. The amens need more punch and hi end. Also, a switch works a bit better when you change the bassline too
Structure is a bit VERY standard. A very simple intro that doesn't really add something to the track, and dito breakdown halfway. And 2 basic drops. Try adding more to the intro and breakdown parts to make them more intresting.
2/5 for the track
1.75/5 for the sound. You really need to work on your sound coz now it doesn't have any balls, and a track like this should kick ass.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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