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f0re1gn 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Prowl' and post your comments here!!!
This thingy was made around six months ago ^^ It was my best and true dNb compo until like, a month ago, when i made something more powerful.. but anyway, i'm hoping to hear any kinds of feedback on the track :]
Hope ya'll like it too :]
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27-12-2004 23:04 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Sweet little vibe to start - cool snare sound, good simple bass line - but then that chaotic sound comes in with the very reverby snare - way too loud - and this happens throughout - loud/quiet transitions (ex. 1:21) had me scrambling for the volume on my mixer. The drum beat isn't bad, a little spastic, and the bass line is good, and I really like the piano when it comes in. But then the track kinda sputters and then just ends - you need some structure here and smoother transitions between stops.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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27-12-2004 23:39 |
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DJParash
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Registration Date: 04-12-2004
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you need to change your levels on alot of things. Its quiet then really loud then quiet and loud again. I like the piano melody. The bas is a basic bass sound maybe change the lfo on it and switch it up a bit. You do have a good Idea here but like I said change the levels abit. What did you make that tune with?
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28-12-2004 00:28 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Thanks for the comments, the bass is a sample from FL 3.5.something, and it was made there. I know this track needs mastering but it was 6 months ago when i made this and at that time i had nfiwtf mastering is 
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28-12-2004 11:27 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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someones got producer rights...... 
funky intro
luv the beat at 0:44 very good imo
but the arrangement of this track isnt right imo..
beatz beacome too loud later on and the track is lacking some fx or eqing
i like the piano , over the squelching bassline
good potential here bro
lets hear somethin more recent
keep rinsin
2.5/5
G
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28-12-2004 22:03 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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pretty good, but ya, what's with the volume? i like the reverbed snare, it's like distortion for snares. it's good in there, imo. the bassline though, a bit too high on the Q. at times.
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28-12-2004 22:33 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Ok, thanks for the reviews. I remastered this thingy a bit, but don't want to upload practically the same thing, with just a bit more mastering. People got the point of this track, and i understood what i did wrong. I think, lolz. Thank you people, and Glimmer, on new year's you can expect a new track from me
Keep the thoughts coming!
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29-12-2004 11:18 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Bassline has nice bass, but the mid part could use a boost.
The bassline after 0.48 is too loud
Drums are quite nice, but give them some more hi-end.
Melodies of the bass are a bit simple and unintresting.
Structure with the fading out and then the drop isn't very shocking either, try doing something more imaginative.
Mostly your basslines sound like synthesised farts, try making them sound more analogue, using the right distortions.
Sorry I don't have anything good to say, but this is just not a very good track
1.5/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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