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Aztek 
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Registration Date: 25-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Trippin'' and post your comments here!!!
Check it...
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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27-12-2004 15:57 |
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djhixxx
Steppa
Registration Date: 30-05-2004
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love the intro vocals and the beat but not sure about the bass patch doesn't seem to fit, i think you could of used something harder, the bass is way to soft for the style of track this sounds like man, i think if you put a real hard long bass patch in this it would sound more together, its quite new hazard style i think.
i'll give you 3/5 for the potential, cos i think this could be something big!! 
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27-12-2004 16:37 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
Posts: 106
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Haa, leet coughs, nice 
In the part before 1:00, make the bass bassier, MUCH bassier. This one is not only hardly hearable, but also doesn't quite fit the whole scene with it's, as already said, softness. VERY nice stuff at 1:00-1:10. Hmm, bass could use a change here too, at 1:30. All the intros give the feeling of something ownage coming up, but it doesn't. The thing, that comes up is simply called, Soft bass+Beats
I'm lovin' that guitar or whatever it is, it sounds so melodic 
End is uh.. a bit too long. I'd like it more if the beats wouldn't go for so long, but like, 4 times less beats? That stuff got prettty boring =/
The sounds are awesome, but the bass just kills the track :< So does the end. I'd give it 3/5, but that's kinda my opinion, and i'm not that good at giving scores 
(that means that my score might be and probably is lowered/too high)
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27-12-2004 18:50 |
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charleskoncept
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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hmm coughin sounds like me this past weekend... sounds like MR. Meth in the backround? hmmm
your bass is really soft on this... repatch that into something deeper and harder... MUCH HARDER.... i like the way the beat kinda creeps in bass first... the hardstep beat is really good but it sounds pre made.. which is cool... i use em...
the synths are a ncice touch that blend really well with the reast of the track....
that bass though needs to be much hatder and needs some variation to it... i know you switched up during the breaks but it needs some during the main beats...
peace...
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27-12-2004 20:00 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Great opening - very cool - Like the hip hop feel and I love the album the samples came from. However, the Rza gravediggaz samples before the drop aren't quite in time. Like the monotone bass but could be even more pumpin' - good dark sound with lots of attitude - its all about the dark cromatic sweeps! Snares could use some reverb or layers. This could almost be a trippin' remix. Love all the stops and variations - some old school styles!
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27-12-2004 21:07 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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wow!, wasnt expecting this...
great intro, followed by some solid beatz, but slow for my liking but thats irrelevent,
bass needs changing or equed so its level with the beatz
the variation on the bass every while where it goes down a few notes i like alot, for me thats the pitch of which that sample works best imo..
hhmm.. coughing is funny
percussion is well arranged- really helps the beat stay a little bit fresh
good little set of ideas imo. needs work though
keep rinsin bro
2.5/5
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27-12-2004 21:54 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Kouching sample is nice 
Hmmm, are those nigga vocals cleared? Otherwise we'll have to remove this track bro.
Downtempo is nice, snare is a tad too loud, bass could use a boost, especially in the mid department 
Drop: nice bassline, serous sub! Try making the beats more rolling though, add some ghostsnares!
Bass in the breakdown isn't mono. Make the bass part of it mono!
Buildup to the second drop could be more intresting, work on thatone.
Overall: nice idea, good sounds, but too boring. Especially the second part.
2/5 for the track
2.25/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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04-01-2005 15:18 |
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Aztek
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Registration Date: 25-01-2004
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Thanks all for your feedback. I agree with pretty much everything said. I produced this track with headphones only, so I am having a real hard time hearing what the hell I am doing with the sub n sheit.
I think even Surya would agree that my compression and eq-ing has gotten a ton better since last choon posted. I was really having problems, not that its sorted now, but definitely better.
I built this while in Scotland with no real monitors available to me, so when I get back to the states I'll run it through my monitors and clean this little jewel up quite a bit. And yea, that sample is *cough* cleared *cough*. I have started making the bassline harder, and damn, it sounds better already. Anyone wanna remix?
Peace
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05-01-2005 10:09 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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is that his phone number at the bottem?
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