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stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'new pole rose' and post your comments here!!!
This track has been deleted because of copyright violation
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27-12-2004 09:58 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
Posts: 106
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irritating start, i was interested, when the stuff comes in, i'm a bit disappointed, though in some seconds beginning to feel it
Nice hopity-hoppy beats 
The bass sounds a bit detuned though :s Add more bassiness to the bass, i think it would be a bit better. Nice melody at 2:00
, but i don't quite like the sound of the bass, nfiwtf. Try maybe finding something a bit more bassy. When the guy is talking, it's all fine though 
The rest is pretty fine, some variation in the track without that many totally different intstruments used
Nice end.
I say: change the sound of the bassy bass and then it'll be a much better track imo.
Keep the trackz comin'!
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.:f33l1ng th3 p0w3r 1s 3ss3nt1al:.
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27-12-2004 11:32 |
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kareem
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Very weird song.Don't like the beats but that could be just me.Like the drop at 1min40.Not danceable at all.I can't say alot about this track cos' I think it's too weird.
I do like some of the basses although the one at the beginning soundz very distorted.
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27-12-2004 14:51 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Like the swing step start and love the hats at the drop - carries the tune along nicely. A few nice bass wobbles and sweeps but overall the synths sound a bit soft-synthish and lack any punch. Check out Marisols stuff - he seems to be using soft subtle sounds but they fill the speaker a bit more. Perhaps its over compressed (Ben - at Fanshaw - said he's been taught that compression shouldn't be used unless you started with a crappy source sound - but he's recording mainly live music and hip hop) Again - well written tune - not as complicated as your previous two but still slick as usual.
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27-12-2004 18:13 |
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charleskoncept
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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downloading... ah here we go....
spoken word intriguing 
i like the hoover in the backround and the way the voice phases out.. although the beat that comes in is really kinda annoying.. i like the main synth line that is realy interesting....the little sounds touch it off ust right...
that beat is killing me man.. i dont know what it is? swinged out?
your kick drum and your bassline seem to blend really well and thats really good. gives it a gutt wrenching feel of speed to it..
peace
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charleskoncept
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27-12-2004 19:52 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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27-12-2004 22:11 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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thanx for the reviews. this track was made with logic and mostly the Albino 2 synth.
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28-12-2004 20:06 |
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Muad'Dib
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Oh well...
4 producing! Way to go, brother!
wow, nice speech at the begining....
I don't like the snare...very lo-fi.. try boosting the higher freqs... the kick is very loud, volume it down... the compression kills the bassline when the kick punches..
The melody needs work... I'm not good at melodies myself, but I know when it needs work. It is too repetative....
wow I like this part, the first buildup or sumthing, good EQ... but damnit 
fix that snare PLEASE!
Nice levels on the track... the voice is with superb EQ and compression...
wow u seem to show improvements in the second part of the tune considering melodies and such... but the main melody, the bass line, is little too loud.. try devoluming it a bit... 
Yes, there is energy in this track, but not that much as Glimmer said 
I like the sub, it's gr8!
And... I DON'T LIKE THE END... come on man, I mean, ending with a delay of a voice sample.... little too empty, sorry
That was my oppinion. 3/5
Sorry, but I can't feel the thing other ones were talking about.....
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29-12-2004 00:14 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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you have a good way with the melody.
very good useage of samples.
the swinging drums, that's odd, but it goes in soo well.
like the first guy posting said, some points, there just pre-fucking-ect. I love the 303. where did you get that, is it ReBirth.
i could dance to this shit. i love the samples, it's such a good fit, and the tape delay on them is good.
you don't over use the sample either.
albino is very smooth, it's one of my favorites now also. i notice all the effects in it make it only be smooth too, no distortion in it, it's purposful, i'll say that.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 30-12-2004 04:31.
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30-12-2004 04:30 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Weird groove you got there, cool
The beats could use a boost though.
Drop @ 2.00 is very nice, but if you gave the beats a boost, it would have more impact for sure!
Very dence prouction again: lots of small background sounds and fillers with a lot of small variations: very nice.
Very nice swinging track again, but boost those drums a bit!
3.25/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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