kareem 
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Spooked' and post your comments here!!!
an old song of mine but I had my doubts to put it on the site cause of the weird sound it has.
Have no idea what you'll think of it but please tell me.All comments welcome.
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26-12-2004 15:48 |
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janverstichel
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like the weird sounds off the begining
drop off the beat is nice but not special
beat is good but I woul'd choose another sample for the snare
youre wright about the weird sounds but they don't iritate
like the new melody on 1.25
you do some nice things with youre beat(plenty variation)
nice track
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26-12-2004 16:56 |
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BUKC
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concept could be allright, but it sounds a bit all too wibly wobly to me mate it's all very random, also the extra snares that pop in around 0:22 are a tat loud, the beats could use a bit more hh's and a few ghost note perhaps?
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26-12-2004 17:07 |
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charleskoncept
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why so much bass riight off the back?
i like the drums pre-looped or is that you? either way they are very nice. i cant say that i liked the sweeping synth though that got a biit annoying
peace...
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26-12-2004 19:46 |
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f0re1gn
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Not bad start, beats are pretty cool too, though yes, snare sound might be changed. Lovin' 1:25, that instrument there is now one of my fave ever 
the bass could use an extra hard-point i think. I mean add a sawy bass. The end is nice :o
The track wasn't bad, though it's not quite the style i like. Add some bassiness and sawiness to the bass, maybe make that sawiness come out somewhere in the middle of the track to give it more powa 
Keep progressin'! 
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26-12-2004 21:20 |
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Halph-Price
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that is a good drumset. nice sample. wonderful. it's got that high happy sound, goes good together. good variation. the extras anre is the only problamo i got. woulda been good if it was a hihat or something. or a different instrument, the original snare and bass where good and that snare was cheese. you already got enough cheese fromt hat bassline.
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26-12-2004 21:52 |
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stickbubbly
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the pitch bending sounds off. The drums sound good at the start but the extra snare hits other things clicking around in the song dont really work. it makes it sound very robotic. the bass is cool.
nice idea's.
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27-12-2004 09:11 |
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djhixxx
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well, this is different, i do like it in a funny way, purely cos its different, but i think it sounds a bit too digital in the mixdown, too sharp, not analogue enough for me, but i lkke the whole idea of the track.
keep it up, but dub it down a bit thicken it up bruv.
3/5
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27-12-2004 15:45 |
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Nosrac
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This is spooked! Some cool sounds - really like the sound that comes in at 2:03 and the drop away soon after. However, I felt the tune should have taken a different turn here instead of going back to the same melody. The bouncing snares on top of the step beat sounds a bit unprofessional - try lowering the volume, using two differnt variations of the same snare and then mess around with the velocity so it sounds more like a real drummer. Good clear sound - very unique track.
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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27-12-2004 21:02 |
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kareem
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tnx very much for the comments.
You guys gave some great advice , thanks.
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27-12-2004 21:13 |
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Glim
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twisted.. great..
much improvement mate!!
okay you've still got to concentrate on placement within a song
you've got some great elements in there now just arrange them a little more dj friendly imo..
i remember ur previous tracks where you had defult samples all over them but this is some progress you've made
2.75/5
keep rinsin
G
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27-12-2004 22:20 |
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Surya
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Fucked up intromelody
Drums: ramble on a bit, try giving them more structure and impact.
Not too fond ot your choice of sounds and melodies. Nice experiment, but nothing more imo. Leave it for what it is and get on with the next one.
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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