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Glim 
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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Please check out my new track 'Dancefloor Smasher 2!!(Kickass Mix)' and post your comments here!!!
okay made the changes in structure, volume, variation, and ending
this is much better than previous
G
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25-12-2004 23:03 |
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f0re1gn
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RAppin'! :o A bit too reverby though, hard to understand sometimes. Nice bass-entrance at 1:05.
Very nice, that fade-in into the main 'ownage' part is awesome, i could feel all the power pumpin' inside me 
I'm liking your mastering, everything sounds great. After the second drop you could use some variation in the bassline or maybe add some other instrument in, do that and then it won't be that boring and that means more awesomness! Leet stuff at 5:00 to the end. LOL At the end though, maybe a bit too long laugh, but that's probably just me 
The track definetely got better, but the stuff after the second drop went a bit too repetitive and similar to the first part, so fixing that would give you an awesome plus.
GJ! Keep it app
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26-12-2004 12:51 |
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kareem
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Nice dramatic intro, like the subbass that follows up.
the rap is not understandible enough.nice beats , just don't like the snares.
The laugh is a nice touch.
At 1min50 I think it's too chaotic and not that danceable.Didn't hear the first version so I can't say if it improved but I do think this one could use some more work.
But it's well done.It has a good bassline.
It does like variation later on in the song.
3/5
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26-12-2004 16:08 |
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charleskoncept
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is that rap filtered? need to stop that cause it doesnt work...
your intro is nice and creepy good buildup...
everything seems to be leveled out well. your synth sweep needs to be brought forward a bit more to give it some effect...
whats with all the laughing in some tracks? are you guys sharing smaples or something...
that amen is really nice... premade? that synth i an hear is nice but i can barely hear it and thats a problem...
its a good track but it doesnt really go anyrwhere... there is not enough to keep it going..
peace....
3/5
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26-12-2004 19:55 |
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Glim
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thanks for the review man
my first real attempt at cutting up an amen break with fruity slicer.
pleased with the results so far as its about my second track on this kinda tip so watch this space...
G 
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26-12-2004 20:34 |
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tetsuo
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Pretty good man, even though i prefer a darker style, i have to say your break are awesome. Like the way it's kicking back at 1:48, maybe could be better if you change the synth oct or lfo????
Keep it up, really good mastering 3.5/5
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26-12-2004 21:05 |
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Polar Freq
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i kinda don like the begginin but after the breakz r remarkable..
oooowwwwww yeah the firefight iz nice the lines could be some other sample but theyr good.
ow man,, i loves the firefight part....
you could put some more soundz in there or some string rave variation..
nice raves at end...
only the small little repetitititivity and the beggining bugs me everything else iz 5/5 frm me..
peace man
an massive rispek 4 da laughin'
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27-12-2004 01:23 |
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stickbubbly
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vocals seem a bit muffled. nice dark melody. I didnt really like your intro but once the song drops it sounds evil. It could use more bass and their is too much in the high end but the song is deadly!
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27-12-2004 09:31 |
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Nosrac
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Love your style as usual bro - dark and aggressive. Superb drop. I think its cool that the vocals are inaudible - gives it a mysterious twist.
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27-12-2004 20:50 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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thanks mate, again coming from you that means alot
still re-working it to add more nid and sub to retain more power as the highs are taking away the freshness imo
thanks again mate
G
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27-12-2004 22:45 |
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Halph-Price
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yea, it's evil, the vocals and everything i loved too. maybe need a good rap lyrics near the end. or some point the the begining. ignore all the "it was repetative comments, it's a dance song, they never last long enough even at 8 minutes, when yuo're out there. but to do dance, crank the kicks to be deeper than the basslines.
okay, the laugh is annoying after a while. the repetative beats are cool.
the rap reminds me of Squarepusher. i love the fog horn, that's amazing bassline! you're a brillant bstard for that if you thought it up.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 27-12-2004 22:46.
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27-12-2004 22:45 |
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Nosrac
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Also, (giving this tune yet another rewind), just wanted to say how cool the higher pitched melodic part over the bass line is very cool - drifts in between sounding very evil then sounding almost sad/dramatic. The breakdown at about 5:00 could have been incorporated in earlier and would make that wicked bass/melody combo sound even deadlierwhen you bring it back. The sound quality is better than the earlier version, but there still seems to be a bit of sloppiness at in your firefight loop - perhaps trim the last one or two ride hits off the loop?? Thanks again for your reviews on my tracks - I plan on getting back to making some serious and complete new tracks in January.
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27-12-2004 23:54 |
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DJParash
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I like your intro with the rave sounds. I like what you did with the breaks. good drum work def. But I think you could lower the octave of your synth, its too high for my liking. otherwise quality work. the bass line is nice. It could use a little variation in the synth work kinda gets borring. slice it up a bit that might work well. Peace Parash AKA Kleric Oh One more thing You have a clicking sound from somewhere. you need to find it and get rid of it.
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28-12-2004 00:35 |
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Sensa
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i like this one! very cool, vocs could use a little compression & the amen on the drop could use some eq imo but other than that, great track!
3/5
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28-12-2004 13:03 |
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Surya
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Nice intro.
Drums: need punch and a boost!
Kickrolls in buildup vary in volume in a weird way. Try smoothening this out
Drop: Nice amenz, bassline and synthline are nice. Give it more bass though, low end is lacking. Melody is real nice though. Very trancey!
4.15: volume gets louder: an compression artifact I guess? Did you compress the whole track?
Overall your mix lacks punch, bass and brilliance, so work on the sound some more.
2.75/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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02-01-2005 16:05 |
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love the created atmosphere.
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11-11-2005 21:13 |
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yeah im a newbe...says so on tha box......im likin yer traxx...dancefloor smasher kixx....sounds like u samped tha "chips" theme an tweeked it a lil.............nice n dark
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04-06-2006 20:45 |
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yoeri
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lol, old tune but that guy's laugh is hilarious
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04-06-2006 22:41 |
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GeeZZ
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vocal at the begining dont quite work bro too much much reveerb n i fink u lowered the pich wich removes sum of d prenucation (soz bout spellin) so cant really hear it too well
i like the all the layers of synths perfectly ballanced works great
beat is strong jungle all mixed up but dosnt loose it continuity at the same time cudnt really improve on
i think the high end takes away from it in places its a bit loud i think thats the compression needs ironing out?
nice track
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22-04-2007 17:42 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
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i remember this song. the fog horn basss.!!!!
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24-04-2007 15:08 |
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