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dNk 
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Registration Date: 29-02-2004
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Check out please my new track that i made yesterday,shit im so drunk right now mery xmas everybody!!!!
Here it is :
Biological Fusion - Paradise 
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25-12-2004 00:40 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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25-12-2004 10:02 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Start is a bit loud, nfi. The Bass comes in really nice, but the stuff after that is kinda weird :e Beat is pretty cool though, screams sound like quake3, lol. The pads, that come in at 2:54 are very nice, good job that. Lovin' this part, awesome 
Dunno, i don't really like the bass after 4:00 
Otherwise, it's a pretty cool track, the part from 3:00-4:00 is my fave 
Keep 'em comin'!
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.:f33l1ng th3 p0w3r 1s 3ss3nt1al:.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by f0re1gn: 25-12-2004 12:35.
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25-12-2004 11:50 |
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dYzeaZe
Blighted Mind
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Pads are being cut off too rudely.. Would work on it if'd be you.
MC's hyped on some badass drugs.
Beat and percussion are very nice. Lovin' the bass more tho.
When building up, the bass is like...
But when it comes to the "meaty part" - solution of the track,
nothing pretty much changes. I'd add some woofing on the
background in the main theme.
And finally, the MC! Strange that he isn't getting on my nerves
at all
, and imo if he'd be screaming less, the track would be
a failure.
Merry Xmas, you get a 3.75/5 from me for making a nice track
and using same zone.ee hosting as me
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Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig.
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25-12-2004 12:46 |
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dNk
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tnx ppls
i try to make something best like this stuff
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25-12-2004 14:38 |
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*Izah*
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LOL I know you 
Yea I really like how you get your beats so rolling.. the bassline needs some work though.. maybe put some reeverb over your bass.. or sumthing
The drop is really hard.. I like that.. But you need some more variation in some parts .. especially in the bassline..
OVerall it's a nice track.. give it a 4/5
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25-12-2004 17:59 |
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dNk
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yo yo Izah
Tnx for worm comment
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25-12-2004 20:01 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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the intro is nice but like said above the pads are being cut off too rudely..very true...good rolling beats...but the snare isnt up front enough...it sounds eq'd out...bring hte mid up and maybe add more high end...(some more percusion the breaks get just a tiny bit repetetive...good none the less) break down...i dont like distorted 808 or 909 basses...it sound like a sub with overdrive on it yeah? not really my feel...everything sounds so smooth, ad then that bass comes in and really takes away form the track IMO...it makes what could be a nice chilled track into something annoying...sorry...then you have a second drop with similar bass only more distorted....not feeling the melody or anything...sorry...i was loving the chilled stuff but once that bass comes in, it takes away from it all...
keep it up though
track-2/5
levels-2/5
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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25-12-2004 20:46 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Nice intro, nice rolling beats. One of the hats is a bit too loud and too sharp though, hurts my ears
Ah, nice distorted bassline kicking in 
Drop: would have more inpact with more powerfull drums. Make them more smashing, a bit less rolling. Maybe a hard metalic snare could do the trick 
Give the bass some more sub
A shorter decay on the bassline, to make it more like kicking, would be nice, it would have more impact me thinks.
Crash is too loud
Second drop: nice change in the melody.
The track has no stereo image whatsoever, try widening some parts (like the string pads)
Nice try, but could use some work. Nice rollin beats you got there!
2.25/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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28-12-2004 15:49 |
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