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S4GE S4GE is a male
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She.mp3 After long pause i`ve done it! This time kind of simplicity & clearness in idea but i hope it`s at all worthy. Don`t think too much on it, just push play and fly high on your feets ;) For all you maniacs: merry xmas & best wishes for comming new year!!!

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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by S4GE: 23-12-2004 19:25.

23-12-2004 19:21
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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great sound man...this is some quality work my friend...everything sounds so clear...wow...hospital records needs a call mate.!!!! go get em!!!

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23-12-2004 20:11
S4GE S4GE is a male
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hieh yep, hospital is on my wishlist for my upcomming promo Smile Thx for that hopefullnes mate! Pleased

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23-12-2004 20:21
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Nice.......... very clean but the main b line could use some more punch in the bottom end. Your proggraming in this is smooth man. def a 4 outa 5 from me. Bigup
23-12-2004 20:26
f0re1gn f0re1gn is a male
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Very Impressive track.. i can hardly even think of anything bad to notice, the bass, beats, vocals, i totally adored everything. Good job on that.

Though there's one thing that's missing here, and that's a bit of an essential part for me : Power. This music makes me want to move, but not totally break or kill something. lol Big Grin

Awesome track, i'll give 5/5.

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23-12-2004 23:53
dNk dNk is a male
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very nice track , nice atmo ur killin me mate Huh


very clean sound nice mastering , what software u using ?


nice nice nice man bigup! Bigup
24-12-2004 07:30
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Like it a lot man! Very nicely mastered, intro main sound is nice, very much like the switch on 2:40, maybe the bassline could use a bit more sub? Excellent track, like your style!!!

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24-12-2004 12:09
Muad'Dib Muad'Dib is a male
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wow, kool intro, I like it. and the beat...nize... The snare is little too snappy, try adding to the lower freqs a little...

Excellent sounds, especially that thrumphet type...mmmm...nize nize... (nize = nice Big Grin )

Good atmo, I dig this track bro! A bit progressive I guess I'm at 01:50 still...
The hihats are little devolumed... try adding a peak at 14kHz, it should add to their volume a bit.

Wow that applauding is SUPER! What a buildup!! NICE NICE NICE!!

It seems that the bass lacks a little body, and seems that that comes from the low sub. You could try to put the melody of the sub on higher octave, or to increase the volume a bit.

Nice ATMO!!! KOOL! I like it. This I'd have definitely added this to the compilation cd I was making... If I just have waited a bit...

I guess that bass sound creates a bit distorsion in the track.....

05:12 The best fucking part of a dnb tune I've heard here, on dnb.be, till today! This rulez man!

Good compression, some levels need work (hihats and subbass)... but the rest is kool and excellent! Nice work, contact a label!

overall: 4.75/5

KRSH, as we Macedonians say when something rulez!

Cheerz!

-Muad'Dib
-2004

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24-12-2004 12:10 Homepage of Muad'Dib
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crispy clear sound
all round and lovely and soft like a fuzzy teddybear
one thing that ruins it for me is the high snare sound
it's too much of an attention seeking snare to fit in this tune
you need a more mellow snare, like the one you used in the intro only more powerful.
sounds very well man. really.

oh and you couldve definitely used the 5.12 phase end to add another piece of drop in there, cuz it gets me jumping and then i find out it's an outtro. so put a drop behind it or just move the phase thing around to a more early position.

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24-12-2004 13:56 Homepage of peet
charleskoncept charleskoncept is a male
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i gotta say i like this one... not a straight trance n bass song but still very trancey elements in the intro.... the horns are very nice touch..... although vocals are not something im a very big fan of.. they blend very well... Smile

man that is a good breakdown... the snare is sounding a little high end.. i think it needs something to make it not so stabbing....

but this is really good man i enjoy it.......

4.9/5

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24-12-2004 16:29
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quote:
Originally posted by muaddib
KRSH, as we Macedonians say when something rulez!


All I can say is: KRSH KRSH KRSH Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin

Really good job, I love it!! Bigup
Keep it up man. I definitely would like to hear some more of your songs.
Great outro btw (trying to say something that hasnt been said Big Grin )
24-12-2004 16:38
Akura Akura is a male
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When I heard this track for the first time two things clearly came to my mind.
1) It makes me really think back at the dnb-scene some years ago. But in a good way, I appreciated and still appreciate this style Bigup
2) Is this melody in general not used before, it really sounds very familiar but I haven't a clue wich artist could have used this melody before.

The rest of my text is like all the rest in general... Very clean and clear mixing. Have to check with my monitors if the sub is missing power but on my stereo it's sounding good.

5/5 (first time I gave this rating Big Grin ) This score counts off course as long the melody isn't used before.

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24-12-2004 17:44
Surya Surya is a male
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Quality choonage.

4.5/5

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24-12-2004 17:52 Homepage of Surya
janverstichel janverstichel is a male
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sound is very good!
5/5
liked it

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24-12-2004 18:20
Muad'Dib Muad'Dib is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by Surya
Quality choonage.

4.5/5


quote:
Originally posted by janverstichel
sound is very good!
5/5
liked it


This is not very helpful u know Big Grin

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25-12-2004 01:03 Homepage of Muad'Dib
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Like it alot nice vibes .
Good chill track and cool vocals.
nice variation.

good one 4/5
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25-12-2004 01:20 Homepage of kareem
Surya Surya is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by muaddib
quote:
Originally posted by Surya
Quality choonage.

4.5/5

quote:
Originally posted by janverstichel
sound is very good!
5/5
liked it

This is not very helpful u know Big Grin

Yes it is: it says there's nothing more to say Big Grin

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25-12-2004 11:26 Homepage of Surya
S4GE S4GE is a male
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My oh my, i`m glad to see that many comments here Bigup Well i want to mark that track has been made in big haste so the final master is poor as you hear. I`ve got probl because my todays productions getting overgrow my cpu and i make some weird things like sampling some sentences to wav and unfortuantely it takes antoher time - fuckn` time that i don`t have much Frown "She" was made on Fruityloops 4.51 as others my prouds. Cheers for all you & thx for listening! Smile )

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25-12-2004 11:28
dYzeaZe dYzeaZe is a male
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Oh yeah, definetly 4.5/5 for techniques and mastering,
don't hear anything poor about it Bigup
But WTF? I mostly read comments about the technical
side of this track, Confused pretty much nothing said about the MOST
important part of all dnb compositions - "teh mood".
(just trying to be objective and say something new Big Grin )

Well in my opinion this track is missing something 4 sure (totally
agreed with f0re1gn 'bout that, but I'd say that this song does
make you only nod your head). Would like to hear something
that would have a message. I think this track somehow
fails to deliver it (if it has one) to the listener. Frown

2/5 for the mood and stuff. Big ups for the quality,
which saves all.

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25-12-2004 11:56
f0re1gn f0re1gn is a male
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Weird, but if i got the idea correctly, i got the idea of the track. The song's about some girl having a cool life with lots of parties or clubs or theatres or something. (I might've just made up this story if i understood correctly by what all you people meant with 'doesn't have a real message', but nfi. I don't really think that this track doesn't have any message at all)

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25-12-2004 12:14
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