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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Indestruction (Destroyed Mind Mix)' and post your comments here!!!
No words needed said... THIS SHIT IS STRAIT DARK, EVIL, and BITES YOU IN THE ASS FROM TEH START!!!!!!!!(well maybe not the start cause ther eis an intro) BUT nasty....just plain nasty!!!!!!!
All drum work done by myself, i think i have a good grip on the amens now...(how do they sound)
Also the reece and basslines i used are from Albino... (i used a hoover and distorted the F*CK out of it)
all kinds of good stuff in here, along with some nice vocals...CHECK THIS SHIT OUT FOR SURE!!!!!!!!!!! (dancefloor murderer!)
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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19-12-2004 22:09 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
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Oooh - dark ass intro sounds! Very deep bass. Are those from the albino? Build up beat is weak and happy (which may be the point) but the sound needs to be spread a bit. The horn sounding hit sounds great with the distorted sound in the background, but when that drops away it sounds a bit presetish. Love the rythyms that many of these dark sounds hit at - nice attitude. I totally appriciate that you programmed all these drums yourself (something I always try to do), and the drums are good but the reality is this track would sound more tearing if it had an amen loop over it. By adding distortion to your snare you could give it that aggressive "crack" sound. I love the big distance bass sound at the 4:18 drop (also albino?). The vocal sample is repeated a bit to much, but is non-intrusive so this insn't a big deal. Great track structure (4/5) but sound (something I'm having trouble with myself) is lacking in a few small but significant ways (2.5/5).
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20-12-2004 19:38 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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thanks for the review...yes the basslines and the synth melodies are all from albino...(presets which i tweaked a bit) I also had a friend of mine give some feedback on the drums...the final version is gonna have a lower kick that i have already layered in there only it will be louder...(so the kick will be mroea gressive, and i should prolly add soem distortion...give it some mroe nice evil feel) and i love the horn sound lol...im glad you liekd it...i wasnt to sure if it sounded right BUT I GUESS IT DID...glad you liked...i may possibly post the final final mixdown...(but if you want it in priavte all interested can contact me..)
Keep the reviews coming! 
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20-12-2004 19:52 |
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spudleyq
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very very nice......i lika tha juice!! i need to get albino!!! i need some new software period.......lack of options means lack of spectrum. this is some quality work here!!! sounds really professional......keep up the tunage!!
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20-12-2004 20:22 |
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charleskoncept
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so you say u used albino? that is something im still tryin to figure out so your one step up from me...
intro very dark... very quiet and evil...
your drums sound muted during the intro and maybe that was your intention but they do sound good.. and i love hardstep beats (mmmmm hardstep!!!)
mmm your bass is soundin good so far.. sounds like a kryptic minds track.... maybe dirty it out a bit more.. give a rougher edge..
your amens sound dead on... the drums are very well done... very precise
it sounds like a really good track.... and i think you did a good job on this one...
peace..
2.75/5
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20-12-2004 21:54 |
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janverstichel
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20-12-2004 22:50 |
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B-complex
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well after reading your comment in the begining, I guess there is no need to review your track becouse you already know that it's dark evil etc..
Nice dark intro, good drum structure, altough quite common, I think that the sound of the drums is a bit "thin" maybe some equalization or layering should help, try boost snare frequency in 200-400 hz spectrum [you have to tweak it] To be honest, I am not feeling this one very much I think it lacks some kind of musiciality. After some time it's too repetetive for my taste. overall it's quite avarage work for me.
2/5
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21-12-2004 18:33 |
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Glim
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mmm.. sinister...evil is upon us..
the machines are taking over
luvvin this intro man
1:11 and the break is sounding nice and clear
whoaa.. ...whoaaaaa...........
did you make those beatz!!???
synth stabs are fat n greasy bro, cool roller, pure dancefloor fodder as you agree
3:10 and the beatz could be a little louder imo.
nice breakdown
you got some really solid melodies at work
can't believe u made this in fruity
whoaa second drop - unexpected but wicked all the same.
really good club material - would play it out anytime
3?5 for sure
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21-12-2004 23:49 |
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Surya
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Intro: quite good, but some weid melodies in there.
Introdrums sound a bit thin.
Drop: quite nice bassline and good drums, but your EQing sucks. A lot of hi end, the mid is almost empty. Sounds really thin.
Quite nice, but your levels need a lot of work
2.5/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the levels
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22-12-2004 19:00 |
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Sensa
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Its a nice track but the sound is too digital sounding for me, too techy if u will....the hoover is verrryyyy cool tho so big respect! 
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23-12-2004 00:09 |
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Halph-Price
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the splinter or whatever the vocal sample is, just found to reptative for my taste in the start, goes along nicly after that.
Albino has some of the smoothest sounds, and you coulda used it a bit better. the bassline isn't deep enough. should bottem out a bit more. it sounds good though, just during the more complex drum parts, which are nicly done.
the distorted bassline also needs some bassboost. maxxboost. you know what would make it nice & sinester would have been some atmospheric backgrounds, ya know something highly verbed whispering. Gargoyle VST works well for that. you had a chime bell like thing that was good, just it was too far forwards, it needed to be more reverbed. lack of focus is what makes it creepy, the lurking int he background shit you were close though.
Dark music uses reverb like it was water. maybe the horn stabs coulda had some more reverb time on them.
great drums, you definatly got them down. defiantly. some low end reverbs would make it fancier too. but that might over due it. i am listenting to it several times, it's good.
thank you.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 23-12-2004 05:56.
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23-12-2004 05:49 |
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used the sample from the beginning too(dark prison check it out 