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Glim 
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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Please check out my new track 'The Grinch' and post your comments here!!!
okay this is the tune i'm going to be working on all next week so any comments welcome on what i've come up with so far...
Peace
G
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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19-12-2004 22:04 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Pretty neat, the beat before 1:40 creates a cool effect of something walking in a weird manner, heh 
The stuff after that is cool too, the bass line is nice, the beat could be changed though, but if you think it's better that way, don't change it 
Keep on workin'! 
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.:f33l1ng th3 p0w3r 1s 3ss3nt1al:.
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20-12-2004 15:28 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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nice i'm shakin and waiting for what to come. dont like the one kick sounding with a lot of high. tirth i think. rest is quite amazing. the TTTTTTT bass you should do something with it. and then it justs stops. i tell you this could be a killer. youre on the right direction. some jungle loops or ownmade distorted every 16 th breakwize. some creepy terror sounds and synth and there you go.
give 4/5 for this part lets hear the rest pls.
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muphasta none dnb
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20-12-2004 18:38 |
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marine289
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Intro is good, but drop, when the beat comes, I expected a little more there.
Nice break, and really nice bassline after it 
Beat could be a little fatter, maybe played a little louder, and some more EQing. Good atmosphere overall.
Thats all I can say for now. Good job.
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20-12-2004 18:59 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Interesting idea having a swing step intro and a amen drop - suprising drop. Loved the sound before the drop (one sound pitching up the other down?) but it cuts out too abruptly - maybe put delay on this so it fades away into the drop. The rest of the track is tight and big sounding, but kind of predictable, but sometimes being unpredictable can sound annoying to some people. Nice job.
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20-12-2004 19:26 |
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djfreemc
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Nice work man!
Nice dark intro, like the little high sounds in it too (I usually don't like anything to high so nice move 
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I expected some more power from the first drop. Maybe change a bit about your bassdrum, it is nice and deep, but it misses a little power, certainly in the part between the drops. Break is simple but effective. Second drop kicks in much better, I like this one! Now it has the power it should have
maybe the low drum sounds could be a tad louder, hats & snares are ok. The end is indeed abrupt, but since the track isn't finished yet I suppose there is more to come.
3/5 for now, sure it will be more for the final version
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The mysteries of the distorted snare...
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20-12-2004 20:39 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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ive heard that synth before.. and it always lead up to good things... hopefully this is the same...
you got good tension in the beginning.. that first drop wasnt really anything spectacular though? what happened?
your sounds are good they all blend really wel together.... i agree, the drum beat is something that could be changed maybe something a litttle harder....the fog horn sound? what was that?....
its a good start man keep it up...
peace...
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20-12-2004 21:49 |
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janverstichel
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very deep intro really feeling it,very nice tention in it
nice melody work
like the little bells too
second drop is suprising
plenty of varation in the bass
don't like the sounds off the bass that much
the overall sound of the track is good
o dind't expect that it would end soo quickly i was just getting in to it
good track
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20-12-2004 22:59 |
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Surya
The Robot
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You're quite good at making intros man, nice work again.
Snare seems a bit sharp. A bit less hi-end and a bit more mid. Kick is too deep. Boost around 80hz, cut off below that.
Drop: nice. Give the kick a bit more punch and give the mid of the bassline a boost for the distortion to be better auditable. It will sound a bit less empty too.
Nice start, work on the EQing of bassline and drums a bit more.
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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22-12-2004 18:55 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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thanks again bro
i used your advice on my last track- like the bassline and beatz structure and length
it got good review after the changes
thanks again
G
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23-12-2004 01:54 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
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yea the click on the kick is not to my liking. the fog horn before the bassline, AMAZING, i am jelous i never though of that. the snare could be a bit shorter, or sharper, it's weird, it's sounds like a white noise snare hit. drums aint bad other wise. awwww... it just ends wiouth anything.... make something like it fade to a long delay or reverb or something to tie it up.
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