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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Please check out my new track 'The Shire(baggins wakening)' and post your comments here!!!
BWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.... OK here is a lil some some i cooked up... GLIMMER loved my last version and recomends this to all renegade hardware fans... whats new? WELL i changed the intro synth, its a little more up front and slides... also there is a nice grimey lil synth ive added in there i made using albino (preset then i tweaked it a bit...quite a bit i might add) Also there is a (tr)amen over the break...its also slight shorter...
As a whole this is the finished product, a lot catchier and i have it dubplated! DEFF CHECK THIS OUT!
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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19-12-2004 17:14 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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okay man, i'm playing the previous version as this is downloading as to get a good comparison. 
okay...
new synth line works less impact but creates a suspense
yeah still got the kick ass snare LOL cool.
i luv those little ghost hits - the eq on em is nice and grimey imo.
mmmm... release the bass, good technique on holding back the beat, it worked before and it works now bro...
THAT BASS IS FILTH!!!
the little whiplash thingy complements it perfectly.
nice extras...once again its all workin for me bro
u'd have to do alot to it for me not to like it lol!!..
still a rockin stomper mate
i would have the extras u added more louder
the ghost hits srouond 4:37 work very well indeed
Wicked bro
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19-12-2004 19:53 |
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Nosrac
Bag of Hammers
Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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I love the 1st drop, better sound than your most recently uploaded tune that I reviewed, but I like that tracks structure better. Starts off sounding renegade but then drops away. Very nice sounds - samples or soft synth?
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Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page
MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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20-12-2004 19:43 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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soem samples...some soft...depends on which parft youre talking abotu...
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20-12-2004 19:47 |
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charleskoncept
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hmmm.. that snare is so upfront.. i dont know if thats really something good. As i havent heard the first i have nothin to compare it too. 
your bass and synth hits compliment each other very nicely.. very renegade hardware... very cool. 
your first drop sounds like a wicked one.. ohh yeah that is nice.... took a little while didnt it? but it is nice...
that synth in there is really nice i like the way it plays off hte rest of the beat... instead of just being backround noise(aka filler)
i love your hats. they accent the snare so well..
damn good toon.....
peace
2.5/5
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20-12-2004 21:46 |
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Surya
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Intro is ok, nothing special though.
Like yer snare
It overpowers everything though. Hats a bit too loud, kick needs a boost.
Melodies need a boost in comparison with the snare, hard to make them out now.
Nice theme anyway. I would replace the constant bassline with a shorter, beating one, to give it more impact.
2.5/5 for the track.
1.5/5 for the levels
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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21-12-2004 16:39 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
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something good to do with te snare since there so close up, when you gotto do variations with them instead of making them not hit, mak them hit in different times. like add a swing to it. instead of a kick a sanre, is what i am trying to say. it's only cuz tehre so up front, it would make them a bit more fun to listen to, but only for a variation. otherwise there setup is gooood.
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25-12-2004 06:32 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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Pretty nice, normal intro, Elite snare for sure, gj on that
The bass could use some changes, i mean the line itself. Or maybe, change the instrument for the bass and add a constant bassline. Something like that would be pretty cool.
I'd give.. uh, 3/5? No idea, hard to decide. Really liked the snare, but i changed my mind after relistening. The start kills it, and after dYzeaZe's post, i really thought about harmony too..
I'd suggest changing this track, these comments are always helpful 
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by f0re1gn: 25-12-2004 12:22.
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25-12-2004 11:36 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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althgough you didnt enjoy thanks for the review...although all samples werent used from fruity...i made this is fruity but all samples were from either this site or albino/vaangaurd...so i dont know wat crippling thing you are tlaking about really...? 
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25-12-2004 19:06 |
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dYzeaZe
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About the crippling sound
It goes like this (if you have Fruity 5)
FLStudio5/Data/Patches/Packs/Effects/FX_EH.wav
so now you MUST have the idea what I'm talking about
But now, when I'm listening to the track again being a little bit drunk, think that it deserves a 2/5 not 1.5..
Anyways, no offense, keep'em stomping.
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Right now I'm in the process of making up a good sig.
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25-12-2004 21:09 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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im using fl 4...and seriously there isnt a single fl default sample in here except for the hi hats...i really dont have a clue what youre talking about lol...
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25-12-2004 21:31 |
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dYzeaZe
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Oh ok then... I have this eeky sample as a default in FLStudio 5 Producer Edition, so just thought... 
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25-12-2004 21:35 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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i've been luvvin this tune for weeks now and that wouldnt be the case if it was full of fl default samples bro, trust me
Peace
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26-12-2004 19:20 |
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tetsuo
Guiness factory
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Just love the synth bass/sound as they respond pretty well to each others, the tune is just as long as it needs to be with a good "uplifting" effect. Your drum are good, the snare is a bit too lound or long for me but the hats are wicked!!! break evrything up
SO that's a good tune for me, look forward to hear the next one!
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