marisol
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Please check out my new track 'Fallen Society' and post your comments here!!!
Started this yesterday and it seems to keep on flowin pretty good so i thought id post a preview before i finish it off.
Lemmi know what ya think...............
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18-12-2004 00:57 |
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pharmacite
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good kinda jazzy startup. i like the "it takes two" sample.
you might wanna turn the snare sound down a bit when the bass breaks in, or bring the other drums up actually..yeah. the bass and snare really overpower it all.
but then it all the sudden ends and..well. a lot more could be done with this track..add something, cut some stuff out..give it what it neeeeeds baby
2/5 or incomplete 
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18-12-2004 02:33 |
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charleskoncept 
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well lets see... is it the same traack i listened to the other day?
sounds the same..
the intro subs are really nice kinda a heart beat type thing going on and then it kinda gets distorted from the beat i think...
the snare is fine i think it needs to be ghosted out a little more than it already is...
the synth hoover is really good not used enough for my own taste. thats not right... inot enuogh is bein done with it.
i think it loses some of that depressed type tone that was goin on with it when the main rythem comes in
but this is just my opinion...
peace
3/5
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18-12-2004 02:54 |
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rinsekru
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18-12-2004 22:20 |
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amperror
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yeah...really like yr beats (again)...also nice pad sounds...good build up, but kinda strange beats starting at 1.50 (weird sd), and bd is too soft...quite original nice dark & funky style....nice
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19-12-2004 18:00 |
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muphasta
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very cool intro pitty about some clips. mmm very nice. the bass is amazing . sub wicked. cool construction. nic build too the drop. snare has quite an impact. very good job man. feels like one of those songs that could go on for about 15 min.
I think its the best i have heard from you so far. but i think your just in 3/8 of the story. i need to know more of this story!!!!
4/5
cheers
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muphasta none dnb
www.myspace.com/muphsugar
reggeadubwise.com
Roots-reggea-project: muphsteppa
muphsteppa@reggeadubwise
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20-12-2004 18:46 |
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Nosrac
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Nice intro - mysterious - not quite sure if its going to be a dark track or not - and its neither! The snare at the drop is too lound and lacking a touch of reverb. Love the rolls - very C4C. Love the feel of this tune. Is the snare shifted slightly late from being overquantized?)
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MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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20-12-2004 19:29 |
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Surya
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Love the woooow bassline in the intro!
Intro is quite long, but not too long
Sweet drumroll before the drop, maybe boost it just a lil bit. From what dromloop did you take it, I recognise it...
Drop: nice, but I don't like the snare man. Dunno. Sounds like a downpitched distorted snare of some kind, but not very nice. Maybe it would be OK if you layered with a more snappy snare.
Nice tunage again! Pitty about the snare.
3.25/5
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21-12-2004 16:13 |
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marine289
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Really nice intro! Nice built up till the drop, but I dont really like your snare either. Well may be its personal
Very nice sounds used, it really sounds great!
I love this track, only you need a good beat, I dont really like this one.
3.5/5
Good job! keep it up
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21-12-2004 19:39 |
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marisol
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to answer suryas question. the break is made from snipits of "turn it loose" and tamborines from "think"
im not to happy with the snare myself, it seems to be covering to much of a frequency. expect the final version in a few weeks. 
and thank you all for the reviews.
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21-12-2004 20:50 |
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Sensa
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I'll cut to the chase...
Intro - cool
Drums - crisp & cool
Bass - Nice idea but needs some heavy EQ imo
Overall: nice ideas & a nice track
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23-12-2004 00:13 |
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DJParash
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It sounds like to me that you need to compress your drums. you need to add a bit somewhere. maybe a nice piano will work i think. you do have a good rythm to it. This track is lacking something and i think that the piano will work well. try it out you might like it. peace
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23-12-2004 01:17 |
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tetsuo
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Just love the intro: the bass is dark as I like but It could maybe better if you had some variation once the rhytme kick in. Mysterious drum, good in the mornig to put your ideas back on track!!
Overall: 3/5 
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