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deciBel 
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Registration Date: 17-05-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Touroidology' and post your comments here!!!
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17-12-2004 14:01 |
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marine289
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Registration Date: 05-10-2004
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Intro pads really remind me of a very good DnB song 
Only forgot who it was made by
Intro is okay, only you're not really building up tension.
and the intro is maybe just a tiny bit too boring.
Vocals are really good 
Nice changing of atmosphere, and nice beat.
Bassline is okay, although I dont really feel it.
I feel that there is not enough going on in the track, but that's just my opinion.
Try adding some more small things, like effects and some background notes played by some low volume instruments.
I really loved the pads (what did you use for it?)
The ending of the song comes to sudden, you should make an outro.
Overall okay, really liked the atmosphere when the pads were played.
2.5/5
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17-12-2004 15:53 |
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pharmacite
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Registration Date: 05-12-2004
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i think its a good start.
the bass sound could be worked on kinda..when it drops low the bass levels drop out of the track.
the drums and solid, but it kinda gets repetitive
maybe change up the pace of the track after the break.
i dunno. dont take my word as truth. i'm all biased to the evil dark stuff anyway. 
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17-12-2004 16:37 |
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amperror
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Registration Date: 13-10-2004
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yeah, i'm enjoying this one....very classic sounds used....beat could groove a bit more....but overall sound is very nice...well done....4/5
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17-12-2004 16:42 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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intro is sweet... so far.... they sound very solid..
until you hit with the vocals... what is it with vocals... 
kinda long for something with nothing in it, the intro i mean...
i think you eqd somethin wrong here... there really is no bass... just that hoover.. the drums sound awfully weak.
they need to be brought up a lot.... the structure is really nice but try breaking up that repetitve beat with something every 16-24 bars or so so it doesnt get so droning...
peace...
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17-12-2004 22:01 |
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Surya
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Sweet intro. Not too fond of the 'soulfull' vocals though, too cheesy for my taste...
Drop: Good bassline, nice drums, but I think the drums get puched away a bit by compression or something. Not sure though. Boost them a bit anyway.
Nice melodies in the breakdown.
Nice track, but it needs something more imo, to give it more depth.
2.5/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the levels
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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20-12-2004 15:42 |
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f0re1gn
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Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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I think the start could use some build-ups. I mean like, get some intensity pumpin'
The beat is original, the bass line is pretty cool. I like the dreamy strings at around 3:00
The track was pretty cool, but still, not the type of dnb i adore 
Gj anywayz.
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.:f33l1ng th3 p0w3r 1s 3ss3nt1al:.
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20-12-2004 15:56 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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the melody is ok,i would like to here some sort of synth between the drums coming in and the beat dropping (kinda like limewax-everything that synth that comes in to the track right before the beat drops)the drums are ok but could use a bit of touching up.theres a snare thats falling in between the 2 and 4 that does give it a roll but sounds more like mismatched loops.match your snares on 2 and 4.if you want a roll in between make sure you turn that one snare shot down enough to make it seem like a real roll.the melody in the second break is good,but when i t drops back in its like a dif song.dont let this slow you down keep moving
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