drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » pharmacite - Dawn pharmacite - Dawn Author Post pharmacite Producer Registration Date: 05-12-2004 Posts: 29 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Dawn' and post your comments here!!! this is a track i wrote just before my pc crashed and i lost everything i ever made. yay 16-12-2004 17:57 charleskoncept Wicked Producer Registration Date: 29-09-2004 Posts: 318 Helpfulness rating:  hmm lets see im gonna forgive the slamming you gave me to be the better man.. so here we go... well lets see.... the bongos and synth clang against each other so much and then the bass drops in and screws it up? why so muddy and distorted? the break is nice, but the bass drones on so much i can bearly hear the vocal sample.. it all sounds really distorted and muddy.. 2/5 __ charleskoncept 17-12-2004 00:02 pharmacite Producer Registration Date: 05-12-2004 Posts: 29 Helpfulness rating:  its distorted because i felt like it. ever hear hard breaks? listen to abelcain. its beautiful. the raw power. yeah some of my drums arent the best..but fuck it. practice practice practice 17-12-2004 05:41 kareem Cool Producer Registration Date: 10-11-2004 Posts: 146 Helpfulness rating:  Beat is good but don't like the snare. Bass is very heavy. Your drops and build-ups need some more work. Also needs more variation. Very dark style. 2/5 17-12-2004 12:48 amperror Producer Registration Date: 13-10-2004 Posts: 64 Helpfulness rating:  sounds original...great bass sounds...i like the complexity...could sound a bit fatter and pumpin'....really gets me in a trance good track 17-12-2004 16:53 marisol Steppa Registration Date: 23-09-2004 Posts: 279 Helpfulness rating:  has bit of a hasty production sound to it. deffinitly needs some smoothing over. overall it has a flow but the sounds are just a little basic. try spicing it by creating a proper sound bed for it. 2/5 mainly the frequency coverage felt it was lacking. 18-12-2004 03:33 rinsekru Newbie Registration Date: 18-12-2004 Posts: 4 Helpfulness rating:  too expy for me 18-12-2004 22:19 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Very dirty drums with a lot of hi-end. Goes up all the way to 22khz, which is nice. But the problem is there's not enough mid (punchyness) and not enough bass for the kick. Acually this goes for the whole mix: where's the bass and the sub? Where's the mid? Bassline is nice but sounds a bit too digital. Very loud and noisy track, but I guess that was your goal. Nice stereo image too. Hard smasher, but the sound sucks man, it's all hi-end. 2.75/5 for the track 1.25/5 for the sound __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 20-12-2004 15:24 Nosrac Bag of Hammers Registration Date: 15-12-2004 Posts: 599 Helpfulness rating:  Lovin' the appalypse style man. Great little vocal sample just before the drums drop. This is pure mayham! It sounds like there's a lot of lower end missing and the sound overall isn't going to get any club play. But you could salvage this as a tearing headphone track by layering over another deep drum line perhaps. I'm a fan of some pretty heavy music and I like your style. Look forward tohearing your later stuff. (Thanks for your review of my track) __ Tunes pictures and info: Myspace Page MP3's: Acid Planet Page 22-12-2004 04:11 demolitionkid where's demo? Registration Date: 08-11-2006 Posts: 401 Helpfulness rating:  i love the gabber kick,the basslines a bit to muddy and the drums clip a tad to much.some distortion is good but it is an effect that can easily be over done .i would work your kick and drums more and maybe turn the bass into a lead.harder dnb really relies alot on the drums.im sorry to hear about your computer,you and greyone are in the same boat 28-09-2008 07:56 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » pharmacite - Dawn