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codez 
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Registration Date: 16-12-2004
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16-12-2004 12:02 |
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codez
Newbie
Registration Date: 16-12-2004
Posts: 5
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any comntz? 
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16-12-2004 18:43 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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simple intro, straight to the beatz no messin i see...
snare could have a little more punch to it imo
...okay... a little variation on the ghosts
need to fill up the space with more stuff
the synth u got in there is way too quiet man, it does sound nice though
structure wise sounds dj-freindly but i cant hear anything in the backround bro
getting a little repetatve, no its a breakdown now..
nice eerie vocal but again too quiet.
nice bassline, ral twisted but the beat is the same as before totally takes away the suspense, maybe cahnge the break or add something.
nice hats comin in, i can see what ur trying to achieve here but the beat is kinda doin my nut in man!!!! 
my advice: re work the drums, shorten the intro, add lots more mid range sounds and concentrate on the drop (drums)
good effort bro
keep rinsin
2.5/5
G 
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Glim: 17-12-2004 00:11.
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17-12-2004 00:10 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is nice, good drums. Sounds a bit oldskool though
Takes too long before it drops man. Try shortening the part before the drop by one minute.
Drop: nice bassline but it lacks a bit of low end. So boost that. Sounds oldskool too, but nice.
Gets a bit repetetive after a few minutes though. Try adding just a little more variations.
Nice one, but a bit too long
2.75/5 for the track
2.5/5 for the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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