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14-12-2004 23:35 |
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charleskoncept 
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Hmm this doesnt really sound like DNB or even any subset ive heard of....
the sex noises? been done before and lots better...
the synth line kinda drowns everything out.. and thats not good..
the drums while not drum and bass are done fairly well.. try layering something under that heavy snare... lighten it a bit... the kick is almost completely non-exsistant...
2/5
try again.. no matter what anyone says....
peace...
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14-12-2004 23:44 |
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Polar Freq
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i think ak1200 deep porn, on the moving shadow 99.1 cd had some porn vocalz (actually a nice little female groaning, nad was very nice made)
ok ETA 20 sec..
5.4.3.2.1..Launch winamp!!
the female fuckin vocies are to , how to say, blunt..
like no refinement.. maybe lower volume, but main prob iz the sample itself...probably they were fake-ing it.. 
nice trancy thing... the drums jump from speaker 2 speaker too much, but are quite nice.
the kick is too low pitched or smthn like that, it actually soundz like somekind of bass thing...
okay, nice phased trancy things, and nice drums but i don like the others stuff much.. sorry
peace
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15-12-2004 00:05 |
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Nosrac
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Ya, as stated above this isn't exactly dnb and the mids are way too pumped up on the synth. Overall a track that has little to offer dancefloors or headphone junkies. (The sex sample had my girlfriend shouting down from upstairs because she thought I was downloading porn. Thanks a lot buddy!). I'd like to check out your newer tunes because there is some good ideas here if the production values have been improved.
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15-12-2004 05:09 |
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Thanks for the feedback. Like, I said it was my first song. I need to really work on this stuff here to make better music. Thanks for your time.
I changed the song tempo a bit...
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15-12-2004 08:45 |
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Surora23
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i think this is like a waterdowned version of some kind of big beat track...ya know like something the crystal method would have made when they first came out...keepn it up, but make some dnb! 
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15-12-2004 22:52 |
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stickbubbly
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not drum.... and bass.???!!?!?!? I cant......understand.
just jokes, nice track. porn samples rule.
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16-12-2004 05:24 |
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Surya
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Not dnb indeed, too slow. More like nu skool breaks I guess. The 303 bassline adds to that feel.
Sub it too loud, but the bass needs a boost, there is none at the moment. Also cut off your sub around 25-30hz, now it goes down all the way to 20hz. It shouldn't.
Sorry don't like it that much, it's just the 303 being filtered the whole time, a porn sample and some breakbeats
The breakbeats are nice though.
1.5/5 for the track and the sound
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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19-12-2004 18:50 |
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Halph-Price
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for it to be DnB tempo you just set it to 170. then anytihng coming out is DnB.
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30-12-2004 04:35 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
for it to be DnB tempo you just set it to 170. then anytihng coming out is DnB. |
Lol, I'll just change a trance tune I made to 170bpm... It's just uptempo trance then, not DnB 
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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30-12-2004 11:37 |
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f0re1gn
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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This is what you can call porn music! This should be used in some porn movie, nfi
Definetely not dNb, all to slow, the trancy arps give that feeling too. Nice melody changes though.
Well made, but i'm not really a fan of porn-music
2.5/5 
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30-12-2004 18:45 |
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