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stickbubbly 
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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Please check out my new track 'alien chapter' and post your comments here!!!
cheers to everyone responsible for the nomination for best tune last month. that was a very nice suprise, and congats to all the other nominees, tuff compition.
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14-12-2004 05:49 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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nice intro, surprising drop.
nice effects give it alot of atmosphere.
Very inventive vocals.Unique sounds and style of drum & bass. I like it. Enough variation, never gets boring.
Like the new sound at 3min05.
Good build-up at 3min40.
4/5
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14-12-2004 17:27 |
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muphasta
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Registration Date: 29-06-2004
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mm dont like the pads that much.but thats personal so aint gonna drag abou that. the snare needs mor body upfronting. you see the amen you use as a break is more power full then the original breaks. variate in hats too .final part is better but stil dulnes in the snare. the melody or the sound is too poppy for me. needs some work i think!
2,80/5
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14-12-2004 19:40 |
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Twink
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Registration Date: 18-09-2004
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good tune. reminds me of the movie Montser Squad. keep at it.
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14-12-2004 20:27 |
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janverstichel
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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i would turn op the the vol. of the beat a little more
nice atmosphere
wicked little sounds
tuff vocals
good break but would be better with a louder beat 
cool song
3.7
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14-12-2004 22:09 |
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charleskoncept
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Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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i like the pad intro and the way it falls out very nice
the first break is very good kinda outta nowhere...
the snare does need some punchiness to it....
whats that voice say.... ? find em? cool...
the way it slows on the break is very cool nice drum rolll..
the variation on the same sounds keep it from gettin boring but try to add some sounds so its not the same ones...
your structure is very tite... nice job especially on the breaks....
great job man...
peace
3/5
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14-12-2004 22:56 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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okay..
pads are nice, but have a certain plasticity 2 the sound that kinda bothers me.. dono why..
nice hats..and shoeS
nice small build-up, short but effective..
yes snaares do need more punch..
nice combo of diff pads an background noiz
i guess the second break is an amen samp??
you could left off the overfllanged vocalz of the dude that talkz of alienz..
theres a good side of the pads but the pad generator or whatever u used is not very good, so maybe thats why i don like'em
peace man...
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15-12-2004 00:12 |
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Nosrac
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Hey PT! Carson here. Nice tune bro! This tune is very meticulous - sounds like it would have taken a shit load of time to sort out all the details. I really like the catchy melody on the last "drop", and all the fine tuning on the filters etc. throughout. The amen is good but a bit crackly - a dry mid range boost and less reverb would give this more punch, and it could be brought back in at random - but that's a different style of tune I guess (killing floors tip). Nice job bro! I heard your stuff from awhile back at stu's place and your stuff sounds dead on professional now. I'm posting a techy work in progress soon called Kindling, and I'll start uploading my big dark tunes in the coming weeks as I refine them. Check em' out.
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MP3's: Acid Planet Page
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15-12-2004 04:47 |
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amperror
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Registration Date: 13-10-2004
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= vocal fx, variation/melodies, toms, complexity, dancability
= intro pads, levels, (beats+/-), bass amount, ending
nice tune, I enjoyed it, respect
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15-12-2004 16:13 |
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stickbubbly
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Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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thanx for the review people. I appreciate it.
mr. Nosrac. nice to hear from ya. look forward to hearing your stuff.
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16-12-2004 05:44 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is very nice, with that pitching sound!
Try making the bassline a bit fuller.
Drums need a slight boost. Hats are a bit too loud in comparison to the other drums.
Nice buildup to the drop!
Drop: cool, with the drumrolls just after the drop, but you miss impract. This is coz you have a lacking bass and the drums need a boost.
Very nice melodies and switches, but your sound needs a lot of work to make it a real smashing track...
I think I'd like to make a remix of thisone! Lemme know what you think about that 
3.25/5 for the track
2/5 for the sound
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19-12-2004 18:33 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Check yer PM
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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20-12-2004 16:34 |
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Surya
The Robot
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09-01-2005 15:41 |
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Moody F
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First listened to Surya's Interpretation,
he certainly spiced it up to a pretty harder style,
but leaving all the credits to a great original!!!
Chilly track!!
Moodz up!!
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20-01-2005 21:19 |
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equipped
tired
Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Mad skill's and tones effort put into this man!,...The Vocal's---->"For 15 year's you've been searchin for some light's in the night sky,..never found any but would really like to cause you belive in your Gullstone?",...lol...is this right?...Never noticed what you where sayin before,..anyway,...obviously advice from me on this track is of no value,.. caus im shure you wont be doin fuck all with it...and you've gottin a shit load better since this track,..so im guessing any problem's or change's with this track have allready been saused out..
....Lookin foward to hearin something new from you phat-man,...i hears you got a new weapon!!!
,...anyway this track is solid man!
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