Glim 
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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nice instant intro
got a horrible fruity instruments sound to it
maybe whack some more effects on the synth
nice ghosting
always find that doing that with some phasering works real nice
1:19 i thinks this is the breakdown??
definatly sounds to pure for a dnb track, not enough grime in it imo!!
the beat is nice but isn't that different from the intro break
synths are nice but lack any real dirt to them
2:33 and the track takes it up a pace
a little more evil and a little rougher
there is a real nicve ghost effect on the beatthat gives it an extra bounce - good move
jus not my style i'm afraid j
sounds like i did 3 yrs back
keep at it
sorry i couldnt give more feedback on production but i'm still learning to man
2.7/5
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12-12-2004 15:28 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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never lose faith in what ur doing
if at times you feel ur not improving just remember not to rush your work and jus experiment with soundz and listen to lots of other generes of music as it really helps inspire conciously and unconciously.
keep doin what u ndo
remember theres loads of help at spinwarp
plus try playing around with samples u load into fruity instead of the soundz provided with it.
practice is the hardest most frustrating part of producing for me
partly cos of the skill reqired and the patience, and its made even worse cos you know you really need to know this to be able to improve and develop. 
anyways this is probably the wrong plasce for this so laterz
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12-12-2004 16:08 |
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marine289
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Nice expirimental track sort of 
Dont like the intro synth, but the upgoing sound at 0:05 (which appears later on in the track) is nice.
Beats sound good, I just cant stand the bassdrum. It just sounds so fruity like. Just add some distortion to it, and it will sound much much better.
Like Glimmer said: work a little more on the sound of your synths. I'd really like to hear this with fatter sounds
so upload it when you have done that!
for now: 2.5/5
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12-12-2004 16:19 |
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charleskoncept
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sounds like fruuity to me.... he intro sounds like something from roni size(through the eyes anyone 
) this is not a vad thing... the drums are really basic.. the snare ghosting was done very well..
that synth line though is really bad....
i think you need to work on this somemore and then repost it there is a really bangin track in there somewhere....
2/5
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12-12-2004 17:46 |
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janverstichel
Cool Producer
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jeah ; i know i used al lot of fruity samples but i'm searching for a long time for samples but i don't want to download the samples one by one
do you know where i can find some large sample packs on the net?
thx for the comments
DM
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12-12-2004 22:26 |
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Polar Freq
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i don't like the string, at the start..
but the drums are great, and the phaser is the right amount (maybe very little decrease)
i like the background small sounds.
the rithm at 1:30 becomes the too much after a while.. nice play with drums..
i like this part, witht he constant wierd sound at 2:45
volume up the string in the background and change its sample..
maybe
i like the drops. nice feelin, they fit nicely..
nice song
maybe a bit long 4 me, sorry.
i don't like it too much, but its okay.
the important thing is to have fun, improvement will come naturally.
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13-12-2004 00:10 |
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marine289
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Originally posted by janverstichel
jeah ; i know i used al lot of fruity samples but i'm searching for a long time for samples but i don't want to download the samples one by one
do you know where i can find some large sample packs on the net?
thx for the comments
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Its all on this site!!! check the downloads!
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13-12-2004 11:48 |
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janverstichel
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Originally posted by marine289
Its all on this site!!! check the downloads! |
jeah i know i downloadet them allready
i mean are there other site's where i can find more
the sample pack on this site are good but need more basses and strings
help me out here
DM
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13-12-2004 14:25 |
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kareem
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I like the song. It has a very fresh vibe,but I agree that it misses a bassline.
GHostsnares are are great and give the song more edge.Nice beats.
Nice song but a whole differnt style of D&B imo.
3/5
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13-12-2004 15:39 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
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nice track. drums could be louder. im not feelin much bass. the melody is nice. A bit too repetative for me.
Some cool sounds and some nice transitions.
nice production.
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14-12-2004 06:11 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Not too fond of the patch in the intro and the melody you play with it.
Drums are nice, especially with the filtered stuff over it.
Buildup: pad sounds a bit too "nice". Make it a bit nastyer. Drop: missing some decent bassline here. Ah, there is one, but it needs a boost and maybe some distortion would be nice to make it stand out.
Gets a bit boring after 3 minutes. Ah, new breakdown, good that you put that in.
The sounds you put at the break of each beat is a bit dull and gets irritating. Try using it another way.
Not a very intresting track. The sounds and melodies just don't grab you as they should...
2/5
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