GiMP-DJ - Fast-Life - 99% finished |
GiMP-DJ
DJ-BAKA

Registration Date: 05-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Fast-Life - 99% finished' and post your comments here!!!
still tweaking the levels
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10-12-2004 00:21 |
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Polar Freq
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Registration Date: 06-11-2004
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i think the raves need some depth at the start (some rev? maybe)
hey i know that dude, life moves pretty fast, if you don't stop and look around once in a while you could miss it..
i like the phazed snare..
now the raves are better, (maybe raise the volume a bit)
i like the halts, it moves the place around..
buildups need more something (uhmm..something yes!?)
change the rithm of the drums more, like play wit it, you know.
i like the silence at the end, its so... different
kiddin
melikes 2.5/5
but 4/5 for the raves ('cept the reverb lack)
smilez
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10-12-2004 01:06 |
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charleskoncept
Wicked Producer
 

Registration Date: 29-09-2004
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Hmm not a very interesting intro in my opinion its just that rave sound.... cahnge the velocitys on your cymbals during the intro to give em a bit of edge...
the first break is kinda lame... your kick needs some level to it...
althoguh its a prety groovy sounding trrack... very danceable...
but your bass lacks any sort of depth to it....
Peace...
__ charleskoncept
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12-12-2004 00:28 |
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janverstichel
Cool Producer

Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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lile the ravez in the intro
beat is nice too
phaser on the snare (i think) s cool
phaser is gone again
like the flow in the song
kinda repetitive
like the build up ttoo
3.5/5
cheers
DM
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12-12-2004 15:28 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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lol luv the start man
full cycle style sort've
wicked
nice vocal sample
mmmmm... nuce
tribal feel wit dem bongo's
1:19 nice change/build-up
hmm.., lively.. beatz sound a little thin or trebly imo
but this point is seperate from the melodies which are nice
your keeping the track fresh by cutting it here and then ramping up each new drop,... it works got a dark jump up feel to it
the mid/high end thing is a little treblely imo..
nice little roller man good
3/5
like to hear it in a mix...
G
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12-12-2004 15:48 |
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Surya
The Robot

Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is nice, quite nice stab you made.
Drop: try making the drums a bit more dense (more ghosts and stuff) to make it more powerfull and fitting with the tune. Try making the snare more smashing too.
Bassline lacks bass and sub.
Some of your melodies are out of key, pitty.
Try adding something more though, coz having the same rave stab the whole track will become boring
2.25/5
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14-12-2004 17:09 |
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